Friendship
A friend's commitment to sustaining a friendship!3 total reviews
Comment from Uma Prosad Das
As you've stated 'I can't drink cold tea'
It's liking or individual's potentiality.
But Peter can do that and tastes all your tea,
He is very social to make friendship easily.
It is a perfect 5-7-5 haiku poetry,
Wishing you the best of luck for the contest entry.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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As you've stated 'I can't drink cold tea'
It's liking or individual's potentiality.
But Peter can do that and tastes all your tea,
He is very social to make friendship easily.
It is a perfect 5-7-5 haiku poetry,
Wishing you the best of luck for the contest entry.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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I really appreciate your review sir. Thank you
Comment from Priyanka24
wow, describing friendship in 3 lines isn't a small task, but according to my opinion you did it very well. a very simple and reality based portrayal...
keep writing!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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wow, describing friendship in 3 lines isn't a small task, but according to my opinion you did it very well. a very simple and reality based portrayal...
keep writing!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the review. It's a spur to improve my writing. Thanks again!
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I loved this. It is so concise, funny, and clever. The picture is great because it helps distinguish the Peter character even more so. Friends who will do anything with a bit of irony. Well done, Holly
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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I loved this. It is so concise, funny, and clever. The picture is great because it helps distinguish the Peter character even more so. Friends who will do anything with a bit of irony. Well done, Holly
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Holly I'm really grateful for your review. Thanks a lot!
