Comment from elliejean

Excellent

Wisdom is the female aspect of the divine. Great. I love the picture and I love the poem. Grasping feathers and rejoicing in her pearls. Great.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011

Thanks for the great review!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet
I am particularly drawn to the line: Grasping feathers of God's truth
A most evocative and expressive poem :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011

Thank you, I tweeked it a little, hope it is better.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this nonet about the wisdom that we should seek, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011

Thanks for the kind words

Comment from manjuneelam

Excellent

So much depth and insight in this spiritual poem. The flow is soothing and the words of the poem are uplifting, wrapped in calmness. Wish you good luck.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011

Thank you kindly