Our marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Honeymoon weekend"Short book about how our marriage started.
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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We waited a year and a half to do our honeymoon. We went to Door County, a very nice area up north. We had a great time and it sounds like after you got past all the mess and chaos you had a pretty good time yourself.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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We waited a year and a half to do our honeymoon. We went to Door County, a very nice area up north. We had a great time and it sounds like after you got past all the mess and chaos you had a pretty good time yourself.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kid review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Interesting how something beautiful and enduring came out of a rather unspectacular beginning. Some people do go overboard with animals. But the two of you find blessing in just your one.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Interesting how something beautiful and enduring came out of a rather unspectacular beginning. Some people do go overboard with animals. But the two of you find blessing in just your one.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your review. Warmly Ine.
Comment from missy98writer
Ine
I am irate because I had written the perfect review and my iPod cliched and poof it rebooted the page and my almost done review was gone ooh!!!! Her I go again, your latest chapter of your journal is excellently written with teriffic imagery, great descriptive writing and you do a good job showing and not telling. Talk about honeymoon from hell. At least you two engaged in mighty fine congress. I liked what you wrote: (We spent nearly all our time in bed and making love as often as we could. Occasionally we ate a bit and had a drink to celebrate our marriage.) I immensely enjoyed chapter five of your journal. I'd recommend chapter five to other readers. I look forward to reading further chapters. Keep on writing entertaning stories and please have a blessed day, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Ine
I am irate because I had written the perfect review and my iPod cliched and poof it rebooted the page and my almost done review was gone ooh!!!! Her I go again, your latest chapter of your journal is excellently written with teriffic imagery, great descriptive writing and you do a good job showing and not telling. Talk about honeymoon from hell. At least you two engaged in mighty fine congress. I liked what you wrote: (We spent nearly all our time in bed and making love as often as we could. Occasionally we ate a bit and had a drink to celebrate our marriage.) I immensely enjoyed chapter five of your journal. I'd recommend chapter five to other readers. I look forward to reading further chapters. Keep on writing entertaning stories and please have a blessed day, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review. Blessings and love, Ine
Comment from Espresso momma
I can't imagine what it would have been like to try to sleep with all those smelly animals none the less. You were brave to stay it out as you did. I liked reading this chapter. Thank you.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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I can't imagine what it would have been like to try to sleep with all those smelly animals none the less. You were brave to stay it out as you did. I liked reading this chapter. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine. The animals were not there, their left overs were bad enough.
Comment from LisaSilva
What an adventure! I've been happily married for 27 years, so you've got me beat;) Thank you for sharing your very informative writing. I love the culture, though some of what you experienced was so "untidy".
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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What an adventure! I've been happily married for 27 years, so you've got me beat;) Thank you for sharing your very informative writing. I love the culture, though some of what you experienced was so "untidy".
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello robina
now no way I would I call a romantic honeymoon
But I can see you braved the mess.
I like your story short and right to the point.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Hello robina
now no way I would I call a romantic honeymoon
But I can see you braved the mess.
I like your story short and right to the point.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine. After clearing the mess, it was great actually.
Comment from misscookie
I'm sorry this part of the chapter will be over but thats all part of life and I'm sure you will have more intersesting stories to tell the good badf and indifferent.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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I'm sorry this part of the chapter will be over but thats all part of life and I'm sure you will have more intersesting stories to tell the good badf and indifferent.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine
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Your very welcome.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Ine. It is amazing that your family would have suggested the place you describe so well here as a honeymoon retreat. Your husband obviously has that Scottish forthrightness in his telling you that you had been 'dragged' up and not 'brought' up. Glad you found a place to rest and celebrate your finally being together. I enjoyed your story very much. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Hi, Ine. It is amazing that your family would have suggested the place you describe so well here as a honeymoon retreat. Your husband obviously has that Scottish forthrightness in his telling you that you had been 'dragged' up and not 'brought' up. Glad you found a place to rest and celebrate your finally being together. I enjoyed your story very much. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine
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You're most welcome, Ine. xx Bev
Comment from peggles
This is a very well written chapter
Well composed and interesting
I shall be looking out for much more follow
I am enjoying this very much
well done
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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This is a very well written chapter
Well composed and interesting
I shall be looking out for much more follow
I am enjoying this very much
well done
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine
Comment from MelissaBickel
hmmmmm I can't begin to imagine what it would be like to walk into such a place and on a honeymoon too! Yikes!! I enjoyed reading the bits I have. I'll go back and get caught up so I can become familiar with the story... I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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hmmmmm I can't begin to imagine what it would be like to walk into such a place and on a honeymoon too! Yikes!! I enjoyed reading the bits I have. I'll go back and get caught up so I can become familiar with the story... I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine
