Christmas Joy
A Christmas thought!17 total reviews
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem very much donnadiann. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Christmas Joy is a lovely thing and a very nice poem.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem very much donnadiann. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Christmas Joy is a lovely thing and a very nice poem.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Good morning, writer friend and thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Very helpful review:)
Comment from rchitwood
Very inspiring and so very true I hope everyone puts Jesus in their Christmas Holidays.Very good emotional images and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
Very inspiring and so very true I hope everyone puts Jesus in their Christmas Holidays.Very good emotional images and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, Rita. This is an encouraging and helpful review:)
Comment from Frankeddy
Good acrostic poem with good message.
Lovely and appropriate accompanying picture.
Good clear, bright and colorful setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
Good acrostic poem with good message.
Lovely and appropriate accompanying picture.
Good clear, bright and colorful setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thanks so very much, Frankeddy. Thsi is a very helpful detailed review. Merry Christmas!
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Nice Acrostic poem. It wasn't choppy like some acrostics, but read fluidly. Great job with conveying such nice thoughts. It was a cheerful read.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
Nice Acrostic poem. It wasn't choppy like some acrostics, but read fluidly. Great job with conveying such nice thoughts. It was a cheerful read.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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This cheers me so much:) thank you, and for the details about the writing:) Merry Christmas!
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
Nice, light-hearted depictin of the true Christmas spirit here. I like how you associate Jesus how he is reflected in children't eyes. Good poem all the way around.
~ CJ
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
Nice, light-hearted depictin of the true Christmas spirit here. I like how you associate Jesus how he is reflected in children't eyes. Good poem all the way around.
~ CJ
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thank you, CJ for a great review. And I love that word
"light-hearted" as well. Merry Christmas!
Comment from oNray
This poem presents so many directions a mind can take off in. Of the seasonal mode and all to come, of the spiritual atmosphere, of the reunion of loved ones for the holiday. (the last being my favorite, right after love and praising God)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
This poem presents so many directions a mind can take off in. Of the seasonal mode and all to come, of the spiritual atmosphere, of the reunion of loved ones for the holiday. (the last being my favorite, right after love and praising God)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thank you for reading and this nice review that tells me so much about my writing. Merry Christmas!
Comment from peggles
I enjoyed this so very much
A wonderful verse
I thought how you have you carefully used each word for to portray your message
a well though out piece
good luck
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
I enjoyed this so very much
A wonderful verse
I thought how you have you carefully used each word for to portray your message
a well though out piece
good luck
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Peggles, this is great, and friendly and a helpful review:)
Comment from Ashley Scott
A touching acrostic clearly showing the love of Christ, and God's precious gift of salvation. I've nothing to suggest for this wonderful poem. I almost forget it was an acrostic because I got lost in the meaningful lines. That's when an acrostic is done right. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
A touching acrostic clearly showing the love of Christ, and God's precious gift of salvation. I've nothing to suggest for this wonderful poem. I almost forget it was an acrostic because I got lost in the meaningful lines. That's when an acrostic is done right. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thank you for such an assuring review to me. It is helpful to me:)
Comment from cathmine
donna, what a lovely acrostic poem about Christmas Joy!
It really is, as you write, about the Christ Child who allows us to see His love in the smiles on the faces of innocent children.
Let our hearts sing year round!
Cathmine
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
donna, what a lovely acrostic poem about Christmas Joy!
It really is, as you write, about the Christ Child who allows us to see His love in the smiles on the faces of innocent children.
Let our hearts sing year round!
Cathmine
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thank you so very much, Cathmine. What a cheering review:)
Comment from The Stranger
this is a most delightful and festive offering here my friend, you have captured the essence of the season perfectly with this acrostic poem
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
this is a most delightful and festive offering here my friend, you have captured the essence of the season perfectly with this acrostic poem
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thanks, Stranger, so nice of you to stop and review. I appreciate the encouraging comments:) HAve a very happy week.