Moonlight and the Oasis
Desert Poem4 total reviews
Comment from thebluestar
Well done Ricky. An amazing write this morning. You are looking for ever skyward and do you see that little star that twinkles in the dark sky, that is me sending you a huge hug for feeling better. Ahh the Sahara, I wonder how many camels I would be worth lol
Keep up the high spirits, and if you need a kick in the britches I can reach if you are not too tall lol. Net
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Well done Ricky. An amazing write this morning. You are looking for ever skyward and do you see that little star that twinkles in the dark sky, that is me sending you a huge hug for feeling better. Ahh the Sahara, I wonder how many camels I would be worth lol
Keep up the high spirits, and if you need a kick in the britches I can reach if you are not too tall lol. Net
Comment Written 20-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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never been there either.
thanks.
ricky1024.
Comment from cherylmelwoods
This was an intelligent write Richard and I really enjoyed the visuals and imagery. You have a great gift for putting your thoughts and words onto paper...... I observe you have a very quick mind my friend.
The unique thing about your poetry is that it is educational, like a documentary of sorts ..... And I enjoy this type of read.
Congratulations!!
Cheryl
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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This was an intelligent write Richard and I really enjoyed the visuals and imagery. You have a great gift for putting your thoughts and words onto paper...... I observe you have a very quick mind my friend.
The unique thing about your poetry is that it is educational, like a documentary of sorts ..... And I enjoy this type of read.
Congratulations!!
Cheryl
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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The mind is a terrible thing to waste.
Rich.
Comment from cercie
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. The visuals and the meaning are both very real. I thnak you for letting us all share this with us.
cercie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. The visuals and the meaning are both very real. I thnak you for letting us all share this with us.
cercie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you cercie for your kind review
Ricky1024.
Comment from mumsyone
I've never been to Egypt, but your poem makes it sound enticing. Beautiful picture to complement it, too.
with gifts of frankensense (frankincense),gold and mir (myrrh).
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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I've never been to Egypt, but your poem makes it sound enticing. Beautiful picture to complement it, too.
with gifts of frankensense (frankincense),gold and mir (myrrh).
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2011
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Me too thanks for the biblical corrections
Ricky1024.