Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Krissy,

The bat is our true friend, ugly for sure with his pugnacious appearing face, but he does us good by gobbling up many bugs.

Merry Christmas,

Winslow

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2011

Comment from xena465

Excellent

Hi Krissy

I love you beautiful wee cat in your profile and think that your write is wonderful. If you'd like help with the punctuation for it, how about this...

"He dives, he flies, swoosh
he's looking for something to eat.
He's very hungry today."

Just want to help, anytime xxx

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2011

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Krissy!! THIS Is precious...and I love your photo of the cat too! I had a house that had bats in it, and I had to always swoosh them out the front door. But they knew how to come back in...they are little mosquito eaters!! AND welcome to Fanstory! Hope you like it!! ")) Susan

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011

thanks

reply by Realist101 on 17-Dec-2011

:) S.

Comment from cherylmelwoods

Excellent

This is spot on with your count! And what great imagery with your words. I loved this piece. Bats are so cute but also you don't want to get on their bad side. Keep writing my friend. Congratulations. Cheryl:)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2011

thanks

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

You are a very talented fourteen year old. This is well-done. You have a good command of word usage and have used your words wisely in this piece. God bless.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2011

thanks