Comment from lucas18

Excellent

None of us can actually think that we are so hectic copied than the love which lives in each one of us daily - and this poem is there only to help us humans and to inspire us lovers everyday to do our very best as it this importance to the working of love in each one of us as real people for a real high-speed planet today. None of us can actually think that we are so hectic copied than the love which lives in each one of us daily - and this poem is there only to help us humans and to inspire us lovers everyday to do our very best as it this importance to the working of love in each one of us as real people for a real high-speed planet today.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thanks for your personal input and understanding the whole purpose of this poem

Comment from Mara del Mar

Excellent

Note: Change the text color, to read.

Is a poem with message about of love. Today day the life is as hectic that can absorb all the time that we should spend we to things spirituals. The first human need is the love.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

yes you sure got it!

Comment from pasinger

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You have a wonderful picture of Jesus the fisher of men. but no words.

The contest requires that you write three lines of poetry, short/long/ short

Line one must be 5 syllables
Line two must be 7 syllables
Line three must be 5 syllables

example:
walk to me peter (5)
lord, i am very afraid (7)
feed my sheep peter (5)

hope this help you to write something

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Thanks for all that insight into it

Comment from Alexander E Poet

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I see the picture but where's the poem? ....................................................................................................................................................

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016

Look and you will see the peom