Dear Mommy
What happens every time I see my mom3 total reviews
Comment from amada
A very warm welcome to our fanstory family. You express very well the feelings of love for your mother. Sentiments are a great part of writing a poem, follow them and you will have great inspirations.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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A very warm welcome to our fanstory family. You express very well the feelings of love for your mother. Sentiments are a great part of writing a poem, follow them and you will have great inspirations.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2011
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Thank u so much for all the great advice and the great message replay as well u have no idea how happy you've made me <3
Comment from ziggy9
As a poem I would have given it five stars. But, because it follows the 5-7-5- format I can't. The first line of the poem must contain five syllables. An easy way to count syllable is to cup your hand under your chin and say the word aloud. Each time your jaw drops that is one syllable. I liked you poem . Keep writing
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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As a poem I would have given it five stars. But, because it follows the 5-7-5- format I can't. The first line of the poem must contain five syllables. An easy way to count syllable is to cup your hand under your chin and say the word aloud. Each time your jaw drops that is one syllable. I liked you poem . Keep writing
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Thank u so much for revewing and thanks alot for tellig me about the five sylables rule ur extremely awesome for doing that
Comment from Janie King
wormer (warmer)There is nothing more precious than a child..the description you have given is one every child should feel when their mom comes near but for many that's not true..for those we pray for everyday. Great ptoem. God bless.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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wormer (warmer)There is nothing more precious than a child..the description you have given is one every child should feel when their mom comes near but for many that's not true..for those we pray for everyday. Great ptoem. God bless.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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OMG thank u so much for the five stars review ur so AMAZING ... hehe can't believe I missed spieled warmer lol thank u so much for letting me know and reviewing :) <3
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I can read a piece 20 times and still miss some little word..maddening...Great job. God bless.
