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Truth or Lie

It's about truth's immortality and rebirth of lies

4 total reviews 
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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The truth never dies,
But, what's about the lie?
It gives birth of lies.

the trouble with telling a lie
is, it needs other lies to support it.

Margaret

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
    Thank you
Comment from SkyAsia
Good
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Good ideally taking the audience into a meditative standard and update. Whenever someone attempts and attends to the despair worlds, there is clash. You make a nice point of compression. There must be resolution. Good.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
    Thanks
Comment from c_lucas
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A lie will give birth to other lies and compound the issues. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
    Thanks.
reply by c_lucas on 04-Feb-2012
    You're welcome.
Comment from Razz
Excellent
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The truth never dies,
But, what's about the lie?
It gives birth of lies.

Very nicely arranged.
So quietly real.
Good writing.

Good luck in contest.

Razz

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
    Thanks.
reply by Razz on 03-Feb-2012
    The truth lives "here."
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    Razz