Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Inspire Me To Dance"25 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
It is what it is and it is cool. You expect us to sing along with you, VP. What if we can't sing? Should we go ahead and try? Sigh ...
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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It is what it is and it is cool. You expect us to sing along with you, VP. What if we can't sing? Should we go ahead and try? Sigh ...
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Hmmm. Yeah, try.
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LOL. Okay here goes ... lalalalala. Any good?
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Sounds beautifull
Comment from BigTomNY
Imperfect!?!? doesnt matter as your meter and flow were incredible your format and structure were also quite strong! The presence in your writing alone is impecable!!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Imperfect!?!? doesnt matter as your meter and flow were incredible your format and structure were also quite strong! The presence in your writing alone is impecable!!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Wow, thank you, Tommy.
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going through a divorce!
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I'm so sorry!
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its agreeable to both sides!
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It's not easy. Especially once on the other side. I wish you well.
Comment from writerwish
Very inspiring poem to move on show expressiveness and feel all the moments, hear all the springs, see all the sunsets then share so we can sing together. So true we are all creative and inspire one another. I enjoy your writings and what a beautiful picture.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Very inspiring poem to move on show expressiveness and feel all the moments, hear all the springs, see all the sunsets then share so we can sing together. So true we are all creative and inspire one another. I enjoy your writings and what a beautiful picture.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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I reallt appreciate such a warm, possitive review!
Comment from Jean Lutz
I don't sing, but even in silence your voice speaks to me. Perhaps because so much of what you say is Praise. That comes through in any language.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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I don't sing, but even in silence your voice speaks to me. Perhaps because so much of what you say is Praise. That comes through in any language.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Like love, huh?
thanks, Jean
Comment from melyuki
awesome Jj, your words would inspire anyone to dance my sweet friend. they almost dance right out of the computer screen as I read them. ah, you have a way with words Jj.. and the flow is gentle as a river ambling along past hills and dales. Huh. I think I must be intoxicated by your beautiful words hahaha. thanks for sharing the ride with us.. have a fabulous weekend Jewell, lots of happy smiles from melxxxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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awesome Jj, your words would inspire anyone to dance my sweet friend. they almost dance right out of the computer screen as I read them. ah, you have a way with words Jj.. and the flow is gentle as a river ambling along past hills and dales. Huh. I think I must be intoxicated by your beautiful words hahaha. thanks for sharing the ride with us.. have a fabulous weekend Jewell, lots of happy smiles from melxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Haha. What a cute review
Now use that phrase,in a new poem.... :) "ambling along past hills and dales"past
Comment from Diny
Ahhhh...
This read like lyrics well and fine
I loved the pace enjoyed the ryhme
and as my songs begin its flight
I will remember to always write
You touch me deep with this fine verse Jj you always know just what to say to make my night and color my day!
beautiful- Di
Dang I can't give you a 6 it is so worthy of one or two dozen!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Ahhhh...
This read like lyrics well and fine
I loved the pace enjoyed the ryhme
and as my songs begin its flight
I will remember to always write
You touch me deep with this fine verse Jj you always know just what to say to make my night and color my day!
beautiful- Di
Dang I can't give you a 6 it is so worthy of one or two dozen!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Aw shucks, thanks for the virtual 6. ;)
always nice to make your day.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello VisionaryPoe
Yes the content of you poem was delightful to read with nice ending rhymes.
The only thing that concerned me was the gold fond on the purple background ( hard for me to read)
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Hello VisionaryPoe
Yes the content of you poem was delightful to read with nice ending rhymes.
The only thing that concerned me was the gold fond on the purple background ( hard for me to read)
Gert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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oh dear I can fix thatz nice to see you Gert!
Comment from fastdigits
I took your advise, I read it and
immensely enjoyed its content. You
do write refreshingly and beautifully
like the dawn of a day filled with
words that are a song in themselves
as they dance down the screen, graceful
as a ballerina captivating an audience
of enthralled readers as each rhyming
verse caresses the heart and soul
Well done
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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I took your advise, I read it and
immensely enjoyed its content. You
do write refreshingly and beautifully
like the dawn of a day filled with
words that are a song in themselves
as they dance down the screen, graceful
as a ballerina captivating an audience
of enthralled readers as each rhyming
verse caresses the heart and soul
Well done
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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What a fabulous review! What are you doing the rest of my lifm kp
thanks SO much, my friend.
Comment from mermaids
This poem does remind me of a song. "When secrets rest behind each moon" is a great line. I like the image of the moon hiding secrets. Excellent flow of words and verses. I see no need for any revisions.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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This poem does remind me of a song. "When secrets rest behind each moon" is a great line. I like the image of the moon hiding secrets. Excellent flow of words and verses. I see no need for any revisions.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Thanks mermaids. So nice to hear from you!
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in phrases like silent screams
I really like the strong verb choices like nudge, caress, create, envision - they add power to the emotion of the poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Excellent use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in phrases like silent screams
I really like the strong verb choices like nudge, caress, create, envision - they add power to the emotion of the poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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thanks Brooke!