Without you
I wrote this poem to my boyfriend2 total reviews
Comment from justjo66
Sorry, but your poem is a good one but it says it is for a 5-7-5 contest. You have not met this requirement. You also
have some mispelled words and "Id" needs the I'd in it. Your poem would fit the free verse style much better.
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Sorry, but your poem is a good one but it says it is for a 5-7-5 contest. You have not met this requirement. You also
have some mispelled words and "Id" needs the I'd in it. Your poem would fit the free verse style much better.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2011
Comment from Kingsland
Id cry and cry > I'd you need to correct this through out the entire poem.
This was all I seen that needed correction in this verse. The poem itself has good poetic verve and is also written in a very good format good emotional content as well. This was my pleasure to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2011
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Id cry and cry > I'd you need to correct this through out the entire poem.
This was all I seen that needed correction in this verse. The poem itself has good poetic verve and is also written in a very good format good emotional content as well. This was my pleasure to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 21-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2011
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thank you very much