Love
Night with my lover29 total reviews
Comment from alexisleech
Pure romance, which is lovely. You have managed to encapsulated every lovers dream of holding someone they love, and hope to love forever, under the moon, listening to the sea, and being cooled by a breeze touching their bodies. I remember it well... Thank you
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Pure romance, which is lovely. You have managed to encapsulated every lovers dream of holding someone they love, and hope to love forever, under the moon, listening to the sea, and being cooled by a breeze touching their bodies. I remember it well... Thank you
Comment Written 13-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the wonderful review Alex.
Warm regards
geetbhim
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very lovely poem, Geetbhim, I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. You say so much with only a few words.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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This is a very lovely poem, Geetbhim, I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. You say so much with only a few words.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the generous rating and wonderful review.
Warm regards
Getbhim
Comment from pickelhead
True to the 5-7-5 medium which is used in Haiku's and Senryu's though for different reasons. Well done and picture perfect
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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True to the 5-7-5 medium which is used in Haiku's and Senryu's though for different reasons. Well done and picture perfect
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the generous and kind review.
Geetbhim
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, geetbhim, a great job writing this poem about the midnight dance with your true love marked on the sands of the beach, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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this is very well written, geetbhim, a great job writing this poem about the midnight dance with your true love marked on the sands of the beach, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the encouraging words your review meant a lot to me
Geetbhim
Comment from oNray
No fault of yours, all you did was fallow directions. I am no friend of a 5-7-5- one cannot be set free to write about feelings then be limited to seventeen cyclically and three lines
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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No fault of yours, all you did was fallow directions. I am no friend of a 5-7-5- one cannot be set free to write about feelings then be limited to seventeen cyclically and three lines
Comment Written 10-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2011
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Yes I too agree with you oNray that in lines orin words we can't expres our feeling.
Thanks for the review.
Geetbhim
Comment from Realist101
Hi Gee! NICE entry! I like the image this portrays. Sounds so romantic and fun. I haven't been to a beach in years!! ")) Very good poem! Susan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Hi Gee! NICE entry! I like the image this portrays. Sounds so romantic and fun. I haven't been to a beach in years!! ")) Very good poem! Susan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the generous rating and review.
Geetbhim
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Thanks for the generous rating and review.
Geetbhim
Comment from misscookie
I love the afrtwork and found it perfect for your poem
This is a lovely short poem
Yet you said enough any lover would understand.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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I love the afrtwork and found it perfect for your poem
This is a lovely short poem
Yet you said enough any lover would understand.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Thanks a lot misscookie, you took time to review my work.
Luv geetbhim
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Your very welcome.
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Your very welcome.
Comment from smudge
This is a lovely poem. The syllables are correct. It expresses emotion. It does not need to rhyme in this category. The picture matches well.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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This is a lovely poem. The syllables are correct. It expresses emotion. It does not need to rhyme in this category. The picture matches well.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Thanks for the generous rating and review Smudge
Geetbhim
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Your welcome
Comment from Rose Hearth
This is such a sweetly romantic 5/7/5. I saw the artwork on FanArt once and thought that someday I would like to write a poem about it. You did a much better job than I could have!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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This is such a sweetly romantic 5/7/5. I saw the artwork on FanArt once and thought that someday I would like to write a poem about it. You did a much better job than I could have!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thanks a lot ROSE for a very wonderful review.
Comment from Chris Tee
I like this poem.
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count...................Spot-on
Flow of piece....................Superb
Artwork.............................Excellent by annie-angel
Rhyming...........................N/A
Content ...........................Sanity just prevailing
Presentation stanzas..........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....... Found "sea-shore"
Final prognosis..................Sane and serene
Total................................. 10/10
Result computed...............Give this five stars
Computed Comments.......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done with the artwork it makes this competitive.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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I like this poem.
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count...................Spot-on
Flow of piece....................Superb
Artwork.............................Excellent by annie-angel
Rhyming...........................N/A
Content ...........................Sanity just prevailing
Presentation stanzas..........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....... Found "sea-shore"
Final prognosis..................Sane and serene
Total................................. 10/10
Result computed...............Give this five stars
Computed Comments.......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done with the artwork it makes this competitive.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Thanks for a wonderful review.
