Comment from yacolt

Exceptional

Nicely done, short and says a lot! Good job!

I won't be writing on this site for a while, [I'm on too many sites. Lol]
Yacolt

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011

thanks for the review yacolt,I have been reading your poem and that was really good I will be missing you on this site,can you tell me the site were you are. Happy new year!

Comment from shirley31

Excellent

oh such romance i do enjoy romance and 5 7 5 i adore you have brought so much passion to this with great amounts of imagery and forever, is forever! beautiful.xxx

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011

thanks for the great reiview
warm regards
geetbhim

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Excellent pairing of poem and art
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form
nice use of alliteration in me and moonlight
lovely romantic scene and genuine expression of emotion :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2011

thanks for the wonderful review Brook

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Such a love story girl!! One in which the object of your affection is danced away into the moonlight. It is beautiful and romantic!!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2011

Thanks for the review and generous rating Gungalo.

geetbhim

reply by Gungalo on 27-Oct-2011

My pleasure!!!

Comment from fairy77

Excellent

That was lovely I liked your romantic pic.You had good expressions of emotion.I loved it.Well done and I hope you have many more romantic nights.beth fairy7.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2011

thnaks so much for a lovely review fairy

Regards
Geetbhim

Comment from Nan Beeson

Excellent

Oh.... What a pleasant thought your 5-7-5 poem induces!
I loved the picture and the fact that dancing near the seashore in the breeze could go on forever.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks for the generous rating and kind review.

Warm regards
Geetbhim

Comment from skip ward

Excellent

This is a nice 5-7-5, compact and descriptive. Your selection of key words creates vivid images in the mind. Good contest entry.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks for the kind review and generous rating Skip ward.

Warm regards
geetbhim

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Love! Short, sweet, sassy and romantic piece. Set the stage you me the moonlight. I like this a lot it has a good flow. The structure is great.Deorre

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks for the wonderful review Deorre.

Warm regard
Geetbhim

Comment from acajudy

Excellent

A nice little piece of work You have said much in very few words Good luck in the contest. You have stayed within the parameters of it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks for the kind review and generous rating.

Warm regard
Geetbhim

Comment from Cheryl Daphine

Excellent

What a sweet 5-7-5 haiku Geetbhim.Very innocent and lovely.You capture well the essence of the night.I loved it. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011

Thanks for the wonderful review Daph's delight.
Warm regard
Geetbhim