Keith & Brianna
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Comment from Carolyn 12
I do enjoy this story. Just trying to figure out about this page.
I have a question-why is she writing down all the recipes? would she not have a card index or an old book to pull out with the recipes down?
If she has to write them down-might be good to say something like she had to write her recipes down to avoid a long search later or just something to explain why..
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I do enjoy this story. Just trying to figure out about this page.
I have a question-why is she writing down all the recipes? would she not have a card index or an old book to pull out with the recipes down?
If she has to write them down-might be good to say something like she had to write her recipes down to avoid a long search later or just something to explain why..
Comment Written 09-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I'm stuck. I didn't know what to say next. It needs a lot of thought. So I wrote a paragraph and decided to plan a menu for the heck of it. Thanks for reading! :)
Comment from Chiina P
Cute picture. I immediately recognized the characters names from a previous piece. Great recipes, I think I will try them out in my next barbeque. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Cute picture. I immediately recognized the characters names from a previous piece. Great recipes, I think I will try them out in my next barbeque. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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You're nice. Thanks so much!