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Pappa's Memories and Ramblings

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Worry and the Birds of the Air"
Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from mumsyone
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I enjoyed reading this short story. I like your reference to the verses in Matthew. If God takes care of the birds, He will surely take care of us.

I have two older brothers(,) an older sister

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
    Thank you for the review
Comment from ItsJustHelen
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It's a very heart warming story. For some reason, it gave me the feeling of a crisp autumn day, with browned, crunchie leaves blowing in the wind. Your wording is very nice. Over all good story. :)

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
    Thank you for the kind review
Comment from Carolyn 12
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This is so true. We do pay for our mistreatment of our body on down the road. But, thankfully God will eb giving a new body when our time comes..Thank you for sharing..

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
    Thank you for your kind words and review