Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Lainee
Hi Jewell,
Occasionally my narrow mind screams for this kind of peace and sleep comes too easily for too long. It may be a form of depression that overwhelms me at these times I am not sure, but i would give anything to be able to tap into this kind of peace at those times.
Goodluck,
lainee :)
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Hi Jewell,
Occasionally my narrow mind screams for this kind of peace and sleep comes too easily for too long. It may be a form of depression that overwhelms me at these times I am not sure, but i would give anything to be able to tap into this kind of peace at those times.
Goodluck,
lainee :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2005
Comment from Wm B. Naylor
Wage peace, right Jewell? Under a gorgeous graphic that sets the tone perectly, a tiny meditation. Well done.
Sincerely
Will
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Wage peace, right Jewell? Under a gorgeous graphic that sets the tone perectly, a tiny meditation. Well done.
Sincerely
Will
Comment Written 11-Dec-2004
Comment from Jaxson Phoenix
Well done my friend,
The flow is perfect and the picture really sets the tone for the reader.
May peace be with you.
Ron
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Well done my friend,
The flow is perfect and the picture really sets the tone for the reader.
May peace be with you.
Ron
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from Shari_K
It is shorter than you usual, however, still beautifully worded with a very meaningful message of peace. We do forget that we just need to look to ourselves to find our peace amongst all this hectic day to day strife! Your poem flows smoothly and is still excellent, no matter the length.
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It is shorter than you usual, however, still beautifully worded with a very meaningful message of peace. We do forget that we just need to look to ourselves to find our peace amongst all this hectic day to day strife! Your poem flows smoothly and is still excellent, no matter the length.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from Mrs Jones
Nice presentation. I love short verse.
Sometimes I search
Too hard for it
When it has been here
All along.
Wise words.
Well done
Rose
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Nice presentation. I love short verse.
Sometimes I search
Too hard for it
When it has been here
All along.
Wise words.
Well done
Rose
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from Mastery
If I could I would give you ten stars for this. What a great job as usual. "My knower" Wow! Great..Your picture for this one is perfect for the words below...Peace ....yes Keep them coming Bob (Mastery)
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If I could I would give you ten stars for this. What a great job as usual. "My knower" Wow! Great..Your picture for this one is perfect for the words below...Peace ....yes Keep them coming Bob (Mastery)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from made2soar
Yes, short and simple is great. I really enjoyed this. I am an old Rhymer, so free verse I have only played with a bit, but the lines
"To know that I?ve made
Decisions headed on
A clear path"
would they not sound better by coupling the thoughts together like
To know
that I've made decisions
headed on a clear path.
Thanks.
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Yes, short and simple is great. I really enjoyed this. I am an old Rhymer, so free verse I have only played with a bit, but the lines
"To know that I?ve made
Decisions headed on
A clear path"
would they not sound better by coupling the thoughts together like
To know
that I've made decisions
headed on a clear path.
Thanks.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from Diny
I enjoyed your graphics and poem!
I wonder why you choose to capitalize at the start of a second line, when it is the same sentence?
This could be just your style, do not be insulted by the question.
Peace be with you still,
Diny
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I enjoyed your graphics and poem!
I wonder why you choose to capitalize at the start of a second line, when it is the same sentence?
This could be just your style, do not be insulted by the question.
Peace be with you still,
Diny
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from El Romantico
Peace is hard to come by these days because we are typically consumed with what other people think that we're always stressed. True peace does come from within but we have to pay attention to our surroundings so it doesn't prevent us from finding it. Thanks.
P.S. What does this piece mean: "My knower,"
Stephen
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Peace is hard to come by these days because we are typically consumed with what other people think that we're always stressed. True peace does come from within but we have to pay attention to our surroundings so it doesn't prevent us from finding it. Thanks.
P.S. What does this piece mean: "My knower,"
Stephen
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004
Comment from shelley kaye
nice picture
i could feel at peace in that spot
i am not good at writing reviews
but i know what i like
i like this poem
its understandable
relatable... though i wish I could relate lol
it is beautifully written
and has a excellent flow and rhythm
although
maybe put the last line [I have peace.]
down on line...
so its alone
*****
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nice picture
i could feel at peace in that spot
i am not good at writing reviews
but i know what i like
i like this poem
its understandable
relatable... though i wish I could relate lol
it is beautifully written
and has a excellent flow and rhythm
although
maybe put the last line [I have peace.]
down on line...
so its alone
*****
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2004