Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Scar Tissue"Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
6 total reviews
Comment from Magics02
Lights, bilghts, fights, MIGHT...etc.. I like this and they all have the same rhyme in them. I will like to read more and please do write that book. Blessings to you writer and new friend.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Lights, bilghts, fights, MIGHT...etc.. I like this and they all have the same rhyme in them. I will like to read more and please do write that book. Blessings to you writer and new friend.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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yes- a bit simple and easy to follow
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Just like I write my style too:) good job
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very nicely said. To often we fight over stupid things that don't really matter. My ex-hubby and I had a 2 day disagreement about how many postage stamps to buy. LOL!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Very nicely said. To often we fight over stupid things that don't really matter. My ex-hubby and I had a 2 day disagreement about how many postage stamps to buy. LOL!!! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the review and the smile /giggle your response brought out of me.
Comment from robina1978
Somehow I enjoyed your others that I read better.
Mis the connection with the title at times-that is why only 4 stars .
No offense meant.
Your picture is nice,but I can also not connect to your poem.
Hope it is not just me.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Somehow I enjoyed your others that I read better.
Mis the connection with the title at times-that is why only 4 stars .
No offense meant.
Your picture is nice,but I can also not connect to your poem.
Hope it is not just me.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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I Named this Scar tissue because the wound did not heal right - just my mixed up brain's why to explain - Thank you so much for the review
Comment from Chiina P
I really enjoyed your poem. The metaphor of scar tissue was highly effective. I think many readers will be able to relate to this type of relationship. I certainly do!. Great job and i look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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I really enjoyed your poem. The metaphor of scar tissue was highly effective. I think many readers will be able to relate to this type of relationship. I certainly do!. Great job and i look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the review - I get great encouragement when folks get the connections to my ramblings - Blessings to you and yours!
Comment from poetstar
This poem has so much feeling and wisdom in it, and I just love it. I just wish we could remember our old wounds still bleed if we hold them to tightly.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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This poem has so much feeling and wisdom in it, and I just love it. I just wish we could remember our old wounds still bleed if we hold them to tightly.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the review - I get great encouragement when folks get the connections to my ramblings - It was my way of trying to let my wife to let go of the distant past - no so much to forget it . but don't let it consume you or you can't forgive. Blessings to you and yours!
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You are a fabulous writer. Your words of forgiveness are so true. That is what Jesus did for us, and what he wants us to do for others.
Comment from Queenise
I enjoyed the poem and the art work you posted with it and think it is a good match. Like the imagery,pace,flow and descriptive scheme you employed in this thought provoking writing. Blessings. Queenise
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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I enjoyed the poem and the art work you posted with it and think it is a good match. Like the imagery,pace,flow and descriptive scheme you employed in this thought provoking writing. Blessings. Queenise
Comment Written 05-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the review and comments- God Bless you also.
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You're welcome. Queenise