Keith & Brianna
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Interruption"Blossoming romance
2 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Intimate story,chapter. Seems the interruption didn't last for long.Sounds like they plan to make it for 'keeps'. Well done young adult fiction.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Intimate story,chapter. Seems the interruption didn't last for long.Sounds like they plan to make it for 'keeps'. Well done young adult fiction.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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You're nice. Thanks.
Comment from JBCaine
Sunny-
Nothing wrong with the writing, can't say much for the storyline.
A little warning next time, for those easily offended, perhaps.
Dialog is believable,no issues of note.
JBCaine
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Sunny-
Nothing wrong with the writing, can't say much for the storyline.
A little warning next time, for those easily offended, perhaps.
Dialog is believable,no issues of note.
JBCaine
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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apologies on having offended you. thanks so much.
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Sunny-
I am not so easily offended, but there are a lot of folks on here who are. Just courtesy to throw a warning out there.
JBCaine