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Me and You 40+ years of Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Look In Your Eyes"
Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez

4 total reviews 
Comment from amarherig14
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The story is well written an emotional You repent when you see the look in her eyes. It is a cry of remorse.It is a good message for think before you speak or act.An apology is a good way to be free of guilt.Good luck.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
    Thank you for the review and remarks.
Comment from A.R. Primavera
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Great work. So sad and meaningful. I hope I never have to know I caused that look. What a hard sorry to say. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
    Thank the review, we do have to pay for our mistakes.
Comment from robina1978
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What a great little poem this is.
Tells so much about your feelings.Is worth getting published.
Flows well,rhymes.
Really tells about your feelings of regret and pain.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
    Thank you for the kind review and words of encouragement
reply by robina1978 on 04-Aug-2011
    welcome
Comment from JBCaine
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GMart-
Another very good one.
One suggestion- "A pain to big to size" -- TOO big to size, I think.--
Regardless of that, you capture an entire story in a look. Just as it really is en la vida.
Best to you.
JBCaine

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2011

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
    Great observation - I will make this adjustment- Thank you