Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Lonely Boy"Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from amarherig14
A good poem about loneliness.It is one of the worse feelings anyone can have and coming from child is pitiful. How can a little person feel that way is something that surpasses my imagination.He wants somebody that identifies with him to love. Very well written and easy to read. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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A good poem about loneliness.It is one of the worse feelings anyone can have and coming from child is pitiful. How can a little person feel that way is something that surpasses my imagination.He wants somebody that identifies with him to love. Very well written and easy to read. Good Luck.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Thank you i wrote that when I was in the 7th grade, it was one of my first poems.
Comment from robina1978
What a nice story and little poem.
Describes a situation so well.
You used a lot of repetitions-but thought in this poem it worked very well and made it stronger.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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What a nice story and little poem.
Describes a situation so well.
You used a lot of repetitions-but thought in this poem it worked very well and made it stronger.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
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Thank you i wrote that when I was in the 7th grade, it was one of my first poems.