Comment from Magics02

Excellent

George this is also good and you can tidy it up in my review here. I will not go on unless you would allow me to. In this line

lord of my life,

Lord (use the cap) and if this does not appeal to you I respect you to leave your work as you wish. I am only here to review and to help. To learn and to grow. To live and let live

Nice prayer

Blessings

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011

Will do Thank you for the observation.

reply by Magics02 on 07-Aug-2011

YOu are welcome

Comment from amarherig14

Excellent

This poem is a thank you letter to Jesus.You thank him for all the blessings you have in your life.What an amazing way to trust the Lord.Even in your struggle you still honor Him.You are blessed.Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2011

Thank you for the Blessing and kind review

Comment from JBCaine

Excellent

Jorge-
Very nice, indeed. You sound like a man who lives the Word, rather than one who just repeats it.
Very enjoyable. I will read more of your work
Thanks for sharing.
JBCaine

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2011

Thank you and Bless you for your kind review