Ballerinas of Winter
Ode to Winter16 total reviews
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a light and delightful work. The selection of the artwork defines an eye for art and writing as well.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2011
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Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a light and delightful work. The selection of the artwork defines an eye for art and writing as well.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2011
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Thank you so much for this lovely review!
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Thank you so much for this lovely review!
Comment from Piggies Grandma
Congratulations on wining the contest Val. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Your words paint a lovely picture.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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Congratulations on wining the contest Val. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Your words paint a lovely picture.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much
Comment from MizKat
Val Crisson - This is a darling ode to winter poem. I enjoyed it tremendously. Contrats on your win. Did you do the dancer too? Love it all. Kat
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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Val Crisson - This is a darling ode to winter poem. I enjoyed it tremendously. Contrats on your win. Did you do the dancer too? Love it all. Kat
Comment Written 30-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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thank you so much - no the art work is not mine, but is it not wonderful?
Comment from Charmane
Delightful background bows to the beautiful artwork
This poem sets the mood for a delightful stroll in the snow.
This ai an excellent compliment to the cool brisk onset of the winter season. I like this poem because it compliments the wintry season and the authors smooth flow.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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Delightful background bows to the beautiful artwork
This poem sets the mood for a delightful stroll in the snow.
This ai an excellent compliment to the cool brisk onset of the winter season. I like this poem because it compliments the wintry season and the authors smooth flow.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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thank you for your insightful review
Comment from Denise S
A very creative layout of a beautiful poem. Picture and everything here was just lovely. Good work. Winter should be very happy about this
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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A very creative layout of a beautiful poem. Picture and everything here was just lovely. Good work. Winter should be very happy about this
Comment Written 30-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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thank you so much!
Comment from JuneYvonne
This is a lovely haiku describing dancing, twirling snowflakes. I also love the poem in the image you have chosen - it that yours too? Together they create a beautiful mental image and a fitting ode to an aspect of winter - good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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This is a lovely haiku describing dancing, twirling snowflakes. I also love the poem in the image you have chosen - it that yours too? Together they create a beautiful mental image and a fitting ode to an aspect of winter - good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much my friend - I only wish I could such a talented artist
Comment from WilliamDeen
Great winter haiku. I like the alliteration of silver snow. Your cadence in this poem is very good. The lines flow together very nicely.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Great winter haiku. I like the alliteration of silver snow. Your cadence in this poem is very good. The lines flow together very nicely.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Judian James
No one does these shape poems like you do!!! It's so good to see something from your pen this morning. It has been so hot lately that I will not, as I might usually do, complain about winter poetry in summer!!! excellent.
Your Snow Queen is charming, N!!!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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No one does these shape poems like you do!!! It's so good to see something from your pen this morning. It has been so hot lately that I will not, as I might usually do, complain about winter poetry in summer!!! excellent.
Your Snow Queen is charming, N!!!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Wow are sure tou know who aim I am flattered if you do! Thank you so much it means a great deal coming from you poet
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Evidently I guessed wrong BUT let me say this, the Queen of shape poetry, whom I thought you were, could not have done this entry any better! You're obviously NOT "N"?
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I am flattered none the less !
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--Very nice picture art to go well with your poem's theme.
--Nicely met the 5-7-5 syllable count requirement.
--Good personification of snow, as a dancer.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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--Very nice picture art to go well with your poem's theme.
--Nicely met the 5-7-5 syllable count requirement.
--Good personification of snow, as a dancer.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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thank you so much for your kind review
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You're welcome.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. Your words paint a mental picture in the readers head. The art work you used is amazing. Your haiku is in excellent form and proper syllable count of 5/7/5. You did a great job using alliteration. I like your satori line: "snow queen applauding." I also like the personification of twirling silver snowflakes 'dancing to winter's music.' I wish you good luck with your poem titled Winter's Ballet in the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest.
Missy.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
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Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. Your words paint a mental picture in the readers head. The art work you used is amazing. Your haiku is in excellent form and proper syllable count of 5/7/5. You did a great job using alliteration. I like your satori line: "snow queen applauding." I also like the personification of twirling silver snowflakes 'dancing to winter's music.' I wish you good luck with your poem titled Winter's Ballet in the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest.
Missy.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
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thank you so much-your review is better than my work!