Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

It is a poem that sounds so
heavy-hearted...Quite
descriptive and
expressive...Good luck
with the competition.
Regards. Mel.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011

thanks

Comment from egmosley

Good

W,
Your syllables are correct. I like the questioning and what your friend did....lie...I could follow those two lines, but I was confused by the last line...friend...or fiend?

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011

thanks and i meant to put friend

Comment from peggles

Excellent

This is so sad a friend who let you down hurts so much. True friends are hard to find and must be treasured and held close
I thought this was an emotional piece and enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011

thanks