Friendship Only Lasts So Long
A Story About girls Growing up15 total reviews
Comment from JeffreyStone
Excellent prtrayal of betrayal. It is very difficult to capture deep emotion and disappointment in a few words. you should feel good that you accomplished it.
Little advice. When you review, make certain you read the entire story before submitting your remarks.
Good luck in your futurre posts. Best wishes for the new year. Jeffrey
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Excellent prtrayal of betrayal. It is very difficult to capture deep emotion and disappointment in a few words. you should feel good that you accomplished it.
Little advice. When you review, make certain you read the entire story before submitting your remarks.
Good luck in your futurre posts. Best wishes for the new year. Jeffrey
Comment Written 31-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you! Happy New Year!
Comment from Jean Lutz
I am a bit late in reading this, but it is never too late to recognize fine writing. In just a few syllables you have captured the heartache that misplaced trust brings.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2011
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I am a bit late in reading this, but it is never too late to recognize fine writing. In just a few syllables you have captured the heartache that misplaced trust brings.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
Comment from e.m.robinson
Good job on this 5-7-5 entry. I think this style poem and having to measure out syllables helps focus feelings. Keep writing when you can. Very good artwork selection, too!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2011
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Good job on this 5-7-5 entry. I think this style poem and having to measure out syllables helps focus feelings. Keep writing when you can. Very good artwork selection, too!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
Comment from judiverse
Hi, gigglegirl. This is really cute. You follow the 5-7-5 format just right. You express the feeling of being disappointed because you tell friends things in confidence and then find they lied. I have been in several plays myself, and am now performing with a group that does old time radio shows. I have never tried writing before a show as a release, but I used to go walking before one. Good luck with your writing. judivese
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Hi, gigglegirl. This is really cute. You follow the 5-7-5 format just right. You express the feeling of being disappointed because you tell friends things in confidence and then find they lied. I have been in several plays myself, and am now performing with a group that does old time radio shows. I have never tried writing before a show as a release, but I used to go walking before one. Good luck with your writing. judivese
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much! Good luck with your writing, also. gigglegirl
Comment from Bayberry
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem with personal meaning. I love to write and also find it soothing, relaxing, and healing.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem with personal meaning. I love to write and also find it soothing, relaxing, and healing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
Comment from oNray
The count is right on. The words are not all over the place they tie together. The end results is a good poem. So I wish you Good Luck on this contest
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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The count is right on. The words are not all over the place they tie together. The end results is a good poem. So I wish you Good Luck on this contest
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Modee
Wow...so much said in so few words. Great picture of two facing one way, the third facing the other. Fits perfectly for the words. Nice. :)
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Wow...so much said in so few words. Great picture of two facing one way, the third facing the other. Fits perfectly for the words. Nice. :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for reading my poem!
Comment from c_lucas
As the author it is your write to control what you publish. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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Second review, Your story shows you have a literary talent. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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As the author it is your write to control what you publish. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
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Second review, Your story shows you have a literary talent. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome.
Comment from TammyGail
Good for you .. a good lesson indeed
Or is it even a lesson? For if you never trust you
Could miss out .. not all friends are back stabbers
But sometimes the ones closest will burn you first
Great poem .. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Good for you .. a good lesson indeed
Or is it even a lesson? For if you never trust you
Could miss out .. not all friends are back stabbers
But sometimes the ones closest will burn you first
Great poem .. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
Comment from mumsyone
Sometimes good lessons are hard to learn. Young girls can be cruel whenever there are more than two! This is a good 5-7-5 entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Sometimes good lessons are hard to learn. Young girls can be cruel whenever there are more than two! This is a good 5-7-5 entry for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much!
