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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Red, White, and Blue"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
8 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
How true that we have much to be ashamed of as a nation. As we celebrate, we need to take a close look at what our country really stands for today. Nice rhymes.4th is spelled fourth~Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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How true that we have much to be ashamed of as a nation. As we celebrate, we need to take a close look at what our country really stands for today. Nice rhymes.4th is spelled fourth~Debbie
Comment Written 05-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the review
Comment from SoldierPoet
As a strong patriot and combat veteran, I can truly appreciate this one. Yes I have made many sacrifices, and I understand where you were coming from in this. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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As a strong patriot and combat veteran, I can truly appreciate this one. Yes I have made many sacrifices, and I understand where you were coming from in this. Excellent job.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Thank you and God Bless you for your service
Comment from gsuarez
Yes, a grand tribute to military and civil service. I felt the passion that went into writing this piece. the rhyme was excellent and meter was also very good. Thank you for sharing this holiday piece.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Yes, a grand tribute to military and civil service. I felt the passion that went into writing this piece. the rhyme was excellent and meter was also very good. Thank you for sharing this holiday piece.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the positive encouragement
Comment from Magics02
Blessings to you on this poem today. Just go back in and fix the Fourth spelling. I admired this much today and yes it also reminded me of our military out there fighting for our Red White and Blue. Great job poet
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Blessings to you on this poem today. Just go back in and fix the Fourth spelling. I admired this much today and yes it also reminded me of our military out there fighting for our Red White and Blue. Great job poet
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Will do Thank you for the positive review
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You are so welcome
Comment from Carolyn 12
*Thank you for your poem today..I enjoyed it very much..I like that you included everyone in..May someday the pain of battle will be waged by words alone..Happy 4th..Thank you..
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*Thank you for your poem today..I enjoyed it very much..I like that you included everyone in..May someday the pain of battle will be waged by words alone..Happy 4th..Thank you..
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the positive words of encouragement
Comment from Chris Tee
This is a great tribute to all the people that has done their share in the country you love and the red white and blue depicted extremely patriotically here old sport.
This is a rather splendidly composed piece we have here old chap.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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This is a great tribute to all the people that has done their share in the country you love and the red white and blue depicted extremely patriotically here old sport.
This is a rather splendidly composed piece we have here old chap.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and encouragement.
Comment from Liilia
A poignant, no nonsense poem beautifully including the glory and the agony of our reality. This is definitely a day to remember and to appreciate what we have in this land of freedom and to look compassionately at the sacrifices that made and make it all possible. Happy Fourth to you and keep on writing those poems that touch the heart and have healing power for both reader and writer. Liilian
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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A poignant, no nonsense poem beautifully including the glory and the agony of our reality. This is definitely a day to remember and to appreciate what we have in this land of freedom and to look compassionately at the sacrifices that made and make it all possible. Happy Fourth to you and keep on writing those poems that touch the heart and have healing power for both reader and writer. Liilian
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for the positive words of encouragement
Comment from adewpearl
Today is the Forth of July - Fourth
Good use of rhyming couplets in this tribute to those who have worked for our freedom, be they soldiers in harm's way or those behind the scenes who provide support for those soldiers. A fitting poem for the Fourth :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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Today is the Forth of July - Fourth
Good use of rhyming couplets in this tribute to those who have worked for our freedom, be they soldiers in harm's way or those behind the scenes who provide support for those soldiers. A fitting poem for the Fourth :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review
