The Glass Cat Eye
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Eye of the Witch"Talking to the dead has its consequences
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
It is funny you mentioned the river Styx because I've mentioned it in the chapter I'm working on in my story (great minds think alike, huh). And I have to say, Doc KICKED so major butt--WOW! A great battle. Everyone escaped and the police didn't believe a word; that's my luck. The only thing I'm disappointed is there's no mention in your Author's Notes of a second story coming up--what's with that? Don't, for a moment tell me you're not going to follow up with a 2nd story.
P.S. I may have you help me out with some "fight" scenes in the future since you did a fantastic job with this chapter. Love the story but start another with our favorite characters now!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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It is funny you mentioned the river Styx because I've mentioned it in the chapter I'm working on in my story (great minds think alike, huh). And I have to say, Doc KICKED so major butt--WOW! A great battle. Everyone escaped and the police didn't believe a word; that's my luck. The only thing I'm disappointed is there's no mention in your Author's Notes of a second story coming up--what's with that? Don't, for a moment tell me you're not going to follow up with a 2nd story.
P.S. I may have you help me out with some "fight" scenes in the future since you did a fantastic job with this chapter. Love the story but start another with our favorite characters now!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2011
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Yeah, my sons told me the same thing. It will take be a while. But I'm still finalizing this one. No major changes, just writing some sentences better; stuff like that. I'm glad you liked the fight scenes. And you honor me too much. Help you?! Thanks for the confidence. And thank you so much for the reading and review and stars and everything.
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When doess the continuation start?
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Sometime in the fall.
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Great! I'll be waiting ....
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P.S> You're up late.
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Yeah, I getting ready for bed now. I yawning as I write. Good night.
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Sleep tight, sweet dreams.
Comment from forestport12
You have me enjoying your writing, when as I said before I'm not fond of this genre. But your style is oh so good. The imagery is original. The plot is stellar. I have no doubt you will be nominated for book chapter of the month one day. Stan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2011
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You have me enjoying your writing, when as I said before I'm not fond of this genre. But your style is oh so good. The imagery is original. The plot is stellar. I have no doubt you will be nominated for book chapter of the month one day. Stan
Comment Written 08-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2011
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Thank you Stan, I really appreciate you reading my story. I'm glad you enjoyed. Blessings to you my friend.
Comment from rchitwood
This was very good Doc got the demon and Steven got the girl Esther. It was full of action as doc fought the demon,
Doc dropped the Eye of the cock when fighting the demon.In the meantime Madame Reese had Esther. Good dialogue and very good characters.Very creative and I would recommend this to others,the photo compliments your story.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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This was very good Doc got the demon and Steven got the girl Esther. It was full of action as doc fought the demon,
Doc dropped the Eye of the cock when fighting the demon.In the meantime Madame Reese had Esther. Good dialogue and very good characters.Very creative and I would recommend this to others,the photo compliments your story.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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Thank you Rita so much for taking the time to read my story. Blessings to you.
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You're welcome Rita
Comment from barkingdog
-he crawl[ed] out from under it just in time, as the venom
What a nice final chapter, amahra.
It read clearly, even though I am unfamiliar with the previous chapters, I was thrilled to read the fight scene with Doc and the demon. It was quite a blow by blow account and very visual.
And then the excitement of getting through the portal and seeing that Doc had made it through was all very clearly described and shown not told. :)
I see no corrections except the one missing letter.
Nicely written.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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-he crawl[ed] out from under it just in time, as the venom
What a nice final chapter, amahra.
It read clearly, even though I am unfamiliar with the previous chapters, I was thrilled to read the fight scene with Doc and the demon. It was quite a blow by blow account and very visual.
And then the excitement of getting through the portal and seeing that Doc had made it through was all very clearly described and shown not told. :)
I see no corrections except the one missing letter.
Nicely written.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for reading my final chapter.
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You're welcome and I look forward to reading something from the beginning.:)
Comment from pickthorn
A very profound final chapter. This story is well written with the characters well developed and extremely interesting. I'm glad that Steven and Esther finally realized their love for each other.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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A very profound final chapter. This story is well written with the characters well developed and extremely interesting. I'm glad that Steven and Esther finally realized their love for each other.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much pickthorn.
Comment from Chris Tee
Absolutely captivating and well written here old sport. This kept my eyes glued to the screen and I just enjoyed it more and more the further I read.
Well done with a rather splendid chapter here my friend.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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Absolutely captivating and well written here old sport. This kept my eyes glued to the screen and I just enjoyed it more and more the further I read.
Well done with a rather splendid chapter here my friend.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2011
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Thank you Chris. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It's my first attempt at a novellet. Blessings to you.
Comment from The Stranger
the writing in this that leads us up to and indeed through the battle for supremacy literally grips you to the story, it is impossible to put this down as you want to know what is going to happen next
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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the writing in this that leads us up to and indeed through the battle for supremacy literally grips you to the story, it is impossible to put this down as you want to know what is going to happen next
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you stranger. Blessings to you my friend.
Comment from Patrates
I like your style of making the events go fast...no boring dialogue. I also like how you were able to describe the fight scene, it did help me picture in my mind what's going on between Lima and Doc. And lastly, I like the fact that Esther finally realized that she loves Steven.
Just one correction: In the dialogue "Come on," I'm serious.
- You placed the quotation mark too early in the sentence.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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I like your style of making the events go fast...no boring dialogue. I also like how you were able to describe the fight scene, it did help me picture in my mind what's going on between Lima and Doc. And lastly, I like the fact that Esther finally realized that she loves Steven.
Just one correction: In the dialogue "Come on," I'm serious.
- You placed the quotation mark too early in the sentence.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much Patrates. And yes, you're right, I'll make the correction.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Good plot that is moving at a good pace and the charcters remain strong. Dialogue sounded natural.
Argh!" He yelled out in pain. (lower case 'h' on he)
"Look!" Esther said, pointing to a rainbow. "I think God is telling us something," she said half smiling. I am sure He is.)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Good plot that is moving at a good pace and the charcters remain strong. Dialogue sounded natural.
Argh!" He yelled out in pain. (lower case 'h' on he)
"Look!" Esther said, pointing to a rainbow. "I think God is telling us something," she said half smiling. I am sure He is.)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you barbara, and I'll make the change.
Comment from Chuck23
I thought your final chapter was very well written! I enjoyed reading, amahra! Lots of action, and a couple areas that made me smile. Now that it's done, I may have to read the whole thing back to back.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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I thought your final chapter was very well written! I enjoyed reading, amahra! Lots of action, and a couple areas that made me smile. Now that it's done, I may have to read the whole thing back to back.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Awh! Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This was my first attempt at writing (creatively) anything longer than a poem. It was a real challenge to me. And you and others with your comments really taught me alot. Blessings to you.