Love's Colours Lost
It's the colours of my heart4 total reviews
Comment from York Lumsey
Nice. Good use of primal contexts in such a short format.
Perhaps an additional preposition in there somewhere would have helped, but it's an open topic.
Nice topic, too. Evokes memories and lost emotions.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
Nice. Good use of primal contexts in such a short format.
Perhaps an additional preposition in there somewhere would have helped, but it's an open topic.
Nice topic, too. Evokes memories and lost emotions.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Thanks for rating lumsey,I like your comment, have a very nice day :)
Comment from georgetitus
just to provide a rating have to sign up this is ridiculous for future should be facilitated no need to sign up for give rating only for efficiency of time
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
just to provide a rating have to sign up this is ridiculous for future should be facilitated no need to sign up for give rating only for efficiency of time
Comment Written 28-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Thanks Georgetitus for rating my 5-7-5 poem :) cheers...
Comment from Chris Tee
The syllable count is spot on here old sport
A vaccinating little 5-7-5 here may I say.
This work could be enhanced by an added picture to it my dear fellow poet
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
The syllable count is spot on here old sport
A vaccinating little 5-7-5 here may I say.
This work could be enhanced by an added picture to it my dear fellow poet
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you Chris, yes I just added a picture to it. Greeting from Indonesia.
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Now that is smart and gives you a great chance!
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Yeah... I hope so, thank you so much, cheers Chris
Comment from Espresso momma
This is a sad 5-7-5. Hopefull it don't last long. But love tends to make us feel this way at times, So thank you for the reading.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
This is a sad 5-7-5. Hopefull it don't last long. But love tends to make us feel this way at times, So thank you for the reading.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Hello Espresso, thanks for reading my poem, and I like your comment, thank you so much :)