Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Pursuing Phenomenal"7 total reviews
Comment from Lainee
Hi Jewell,
It is kind of like taking time to smell the roses and then sharing the aroma with everybody isn't it but with modesty and simple joy of sharing.
Goodluck with this,
Lainee :)
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Hi Jewell,
It is kind of like taking time to smell the roses and then sharing the aroma with everybody isn't it but with modesty and simple joy of sharing.
Goodluck with this,
Lainee :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2005
Comment from Walter L. Jones
A touch of passion shared, words that teach the reader, put their mind some new place ah, it is done with such sweetness, liked the flow enjoyed the thought, and found many messages with which I can roll around in.. Excellent write.. Walt
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A touch of passion shared, words that teach the reader, put their mind some new place ah, it is done with such sweetness, liked the flow enjoyed the thought, and found many messages with which I can roll around in.. Excellent write.. Walt
Comment Written 05-Jan-2005
Comment from made2soar
WOW!! Wonderful thoughts and wonderful flow. When I started, it looked long, but you so effortlessly walked me through it and when I quickly reached the end, I didn't want to stop. I loved it, and even more I love the attitude that "seeps" out of you. There is no better reward for lifting someone up, than to see them succeed. I look forward to more, you have made me a fan.
Jim
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WOW!! Wonderful thoughts and wonderful flow. When I started, it looked long, but you so effortlessly walked me through it and when I quickly reached the end, I didn't want to stop. I loved it, and even more I love the attitude that "seeps" out of you. There is no better reward for lifting someone up, than to see them succeed. I look forward to more, you have made me a fan.
Jim
Comment Written 11-Dec-2004
Comment from Jaxson Phoenix
Jewell, you are well on your way to achieving these goals. Keep striving for greatness so that we may all be edified by your work. I see great things ahead for you and wish you much success in your journey.
Oh yeah, the poem, It was well constructed. It flows nicely and conveys its message eloquently. Well done.
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Jewell, you are well on your way to achieving these goals. Keep striving for greatness so that we may all be edified by your work. I see great things ahead for you and wish you much success in your journey.
Oh yeah, the poem, It was well constructed. It flows nicely and conveys its message eloquently. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2004
Comment from El Romantico
I think I saw a few typos like pursued versus pursue which I think would sound better, but that is only my opinion. I think there are only a few more but I don't care. I feel that this poem is a great self reflection of your beauty, talent, and gifts that were given you from the start. I don't think that I could have said it better myself. Thank you.
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I think I saw a few typos like pursued versus pursue which I think would sound better, but that is only my opinion. I think there are only a few more but I don't care. I feel that this poem is a great self reflection of your beauty, talent, and gifts that were given you from the start. I don't think that I could have said it better myself. Thank you.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2004
Comment from MoonRays
"My hope is that the words
I choose penetrate the mind
and encourage the listener
to step out of their box
of mediocrity and not
to bring about jealousy
but challenge to improve."
You encourage me to improve! Your line about hearts and not stars is soooo sweet. I think I am on a similar track, but have never put it into such cute words.
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"My hope is that the words
I choose penetrate the mind
and encourage the listener
to step out of their box
of mediocrity and not
to bring about jealousy
but challenge to improve."
You encourage me to improve! Your line about hearts and not stars is soooo sweet. I think I am on a similar track, but have never put it into such cute words.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2004
Comment from InfinitySeven
I know what you mean Jewell. I have a similar desire that drives me on. I hope to be something more than I am. You've managed to create something uniquely personal and yet wholly universal. One suggestion: I think tredge is supposed to be trudge. Thanks for sharing this.
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I know what you mean Jewell. I have a similar desire that drives me on. I hope to be something more than I am. You've managed to create something uniquely personal and yet wholly universal. One suggestion: I think tredge is supposed to be trudge. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2004