Dangerous Fun
Sometimes we have to decide,what is fun.4 total reviews
Comment from jallis25
such truth in this but isn't the fun worth the risk for some it is. i love hights and risk taking, so thanks for the enjoyment of the picture you have for your poem, it looks like fun. the poem was also good.
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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such truth in this but isn't the fun worth the risk for some it is. i love hights and risk taking, so thanks for the enjoyment of the picture you have for your poem, it looks like fun. the poem was also good.
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thank you for the review,I am pleased that you enjoyed both poem and the picture I chose.Have a wonderful day with many blessings.
Comment from DonandVicki
Very nice Haiku, even though Haikus are not suppose to rhyme your seemed a perfect choice of words. Good choice of art work to enhance the meaning.Don
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Very nice Haiku, even though Haikus are not suppose to rhyme your seemed a perfect choice of words. Good choice of art work to enhance the meaning.Don
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from 7thpoet
I guess that is what makes us human...that Ability to throw logic to the wind and roll those dice, faster, harder, the thrill of it all. It is a great metaphor .
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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I guess that is what makes us human...that Ability to throw logic to the wind and roll those dice, faster, harder, the thrill of it all. It is a great metaphor .
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Thank you for the review i am so pleased you enjoyed it,hope to have more for review in the near future.Have a wonderful day 7thpoet.
Comment from danpald
When young it seems the dangers flee
This picture used shows such a glee
For the danger we learn as adults
Make childhood longed for in the heart
Danger that comes from a tree to climb
The rising up a cliff on the hill side
Rocks that are meant to shimmy
The longing to be free and silly
Those types of fears come to light
With this poem of pure delight
Well the heart of a poet to bring
The dreams of the child to older years
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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When young it seems the dangers flee
This picture used shows such a glee
For the danger we learn as adults
Make childhood longed for in the heart
Danger that comes from a tree to climb
The rising up a cliff on the hill side
Rocks that are meant to shimmy
The longing to be free and silly
Those types of fears come to light
With this poem of pure delight
Well the heart of a poet to bring
The dreams of the child to older years
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Thank you for your review,it pleases me to have inspired the poem you've written as response.Have a wonderful day danpaid and enjoy those memories of childhood days.