Don't Fence Me In
A story of survival23 total reviews
Comment from dbmccarter
I like the subtle way you lead to the divorce. The fence as symbol freedom works great. I really like the art work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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I like the subtle way you lead to the divorce. The fence as symbol freedom works great. I really like the art work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you very much for this kind and generous review. -Judy
Comment from Joy B
Oh my! This is so good. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it. Your writing has- blossomed- if that's the right word. This is sooo good! Love the dialogue- you are a natural. Keep it up. I will be first inline to buy your first book.
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Oh my! This is so good. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it. Your writing has- blossomed- if that's the right word. This is sooo good! Love the dialogue- you are a natural. Keep it up. I will be first inline to buy your first book.
Comment Written 06-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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I am grinning Joy, thank you. The Lord has put a few more stories in my head this day and I can't wait to begin putting them on paper. I appreciate your encouragement. -Judy
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This was very entertaining and very well written. You held my attention all the way through this piece. You made me feel sorry for Cynthia and what she had to put up with and you also gave her a back bone. You go girl :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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This was very entertaining and very well written. You held my attention all the way through this piece. You made me feel sorry for Cynthia and what she had to put up with and you also gave her a back bone. You go girl :)
Comment Written 06-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind comments. -Judy
Comment from The Stranger
well they alaways say that the best things in life are worth waiting for, now was that Brad finally getting his cummupance or Cynthia gaining her home.....
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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well they alaways say that the best things in life are worth waiting for, now was that Brad finally getting his cummupance or Cynthia gaining her home.....
Comment Written 06-May-2011
reply by the author on 06-May-2011
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Thanks for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the excellent rating as well. -Judy
Comment from marcii
What an interesting story, nice way to get rid of the good for nothing layabout, by the sounds of it.
Why do so many woman stay when they know long before that the other person is pulling them down. I was lucky I suppose for I got out from an abusive marriage within two years.
Marcii
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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What an interesting story, nice way to get rid of the good for nothing layabout, by the sounds of it.
Why do so many woman stay when they know long before that the other person is pulling them down. I was lucky I suppose for I got out from an abusive marriage within two years.
Marcii
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Good for you Marcii. Thank you for this review and great rating. -Judy
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You have written an excellent story which I really enjoyed. You have setting, conflict, and resolution, as well as a surprise ending. Good luck in the competition.
Giddy
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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You have written an excellent story which I really enjoyed. You have setting, conflict, and resolution, as well as a surprise ending. Good luck in the competition.
Giddy
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you, Giddy. I appreciate the review and kind comments. -Judy
Comment from nancyjam
Great story. i like the subtle way you
let the reader know Brad's a rat through
the dialogue with Cynthia.
always good to read a story where a weak
character gains strength.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Great story. i like the subtle way you
let the reader know Brad's a rat through
the dialogue with Cynthia.
always good to read a story where a weak
character gains strength.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you for the review and the excellent rating. -Judy
Comment from animatqua
Ah, yes. The whole American dream that a white picket fence stands for can be very different from person to person. This story is an excellent illustration of that--and very well written to boot.
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Ah, yes. The whole American dream that a white picket fence stands for can be very different from person to person. This story is an excellent illustration of that--and very well written to boot.
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind comments and wonderful rating. -Judy
Comment from eliz100
This was a good read from beginning to end. I always like it when woman stand up for themselves. You did a great job in describing this.
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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This was a good read from beginning to end. I always like it when woman stand up for themselves. You did a great job in describing this.
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you for reviewing and for your comments. -Judy
Comment from Belinda
Wow ... finally Cynthia mustered the courage to erect a fence as a symbol of a perfect life for herself. Good timing and everything for her, and good reading for us ... :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Wow ... finally Cynthia mustered the courage to erect a fence as a symbol of a perfect life for herself. Good timing and everything for her, and good reading for us ... :)
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you, Belinda, I a please you like this story. I appreciate the rating. -Judy