Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from shelley kaye
wow i loved that poem! I felt so much emotion, and couldn't help but smile. . . there is one line: [Only allow it.] that kind of confused me, but other than that I think it was great :)
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wow i loved that poem! I felt so much emotion, and couldn't help but smile. . . there is one line: [Only allow it.] that kind of confused me, but other than that I think it was great :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2004
Comment from Graceheart
Your dreams are evident in many things that you pen my caring friend. Your heart is opened by those visions of light and love. We, your readers enjoy the journeys we travel on with your imaginations guiding them! You often travel to that soft, inspirational place, that one that is right there in your longing heart! Write of your travels, of the feelings they inspire! This is very powerful and I look forward to your next fantasy!
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Your dreams are evident in many things that you pen my caring friend. Your heart is opened by those visions of light and love. We, your readers enjoy the journeys we travel on with your imaginations guiding them! You often travel to that soft, inspirational place, that one that is right there in your longing heart! Write of your travels, of the feelings they inspire! This is very powerful and I look forward to your next fantasy!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2004
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Oh girl, I think I already give you all of that. What is, what will be, what I dream of is always in my writing. You did an outstanding job with this one. I know I'm always visiting that land and perhaps you are right there beside me as well.
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Oh girl, I think I already give you all of that. What is, what will be, what I dream of is always in my writing. You did an outstanding job with this one. I know I'm always visiting that land and perhaps you are right there beside me as well.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2004
Comment from Dingus
I enjoyed the overall message in your poem. espaecially:
My hope for you
Is that you are able
To see what good
Lies ahead if you,
Only allow it.
That is a good point, sometimes we don't allow ourselves to be happy, and to see what we are capable of.
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I enjoyed the overall message in your poem. espaecially:
My hope for you
Is that you are able
To see what good
Lies ahead if you,
Only allow it.
That is a good point, sometimes we don't allow ourselves to be happy, and to see what we are capable of.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2004
Comment from expired: LegacysAngel
How can anyone go on without dreaming? Thinking of what could happen: good or bad?
Great job expressing your thoughts on dreaming! Your emotions poured through very well, it reminded me of the clouds in your pic. (Cool pic by the way.) Your poem flowed very well.
Great job! Can't wait to read more!!!!!
LegacysAngel
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How can anyone go on without dreaming? Thinking of what could happen: good or bad?
Great job expressing your thoughts on dreaming! Your emotions poured through very well, it reminded me of the clouds in your pic. (Cool pic by the way.) Your poem flowed very well.
Great job! Can't wait to read more!!!!!
LegacysAngel
Comment Written 14-Nov-2004
Comment from Drimitz
Excellent poem, this was a great read and quick. Loved the poets style of writing and no noticeable corrections to be made. Keep up the great word.
Drimitz
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Excellent poem, this was a great read and quick. Loved the poets style of writing and no noticeable corrections to be made. Keep up the great word.
Drimitz
Comment Written 14-Nov-2004