haiku (wrapped in soft moonlight)
haiku 5-7-512 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Oooh Connie, this was truly beautiful my friend, the soft moonlight casting its glow onto both the water and the lovers faces. Loved the third clever line and this had a wonderful allure about it.
Verrrrry nicely penned and a lovely expression and presentation. Hope you did well in the contest.
Cheers Phillippa xoxo
PS Sorry for the late review.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2011
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Oooh Connie, this was truly beautiful my friend, the soft moonlight casting its glow onto both the water and the lovers faces. Loved the third clever line and this had a wonderful allure about it.
Verrrrry nicely penned and a lovely expression and presentation. Hope you did well in the contest.
Cheers Phillippa xoxo
PS Sorry for the late review.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2011
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Thank you, Phillippa, for such a glowing review. I didn't win the contest; in fact, I
might have only gotten one vote, but that's okay. I got some very good feedback, and that's what counts. Thanks again, dear friend. Connie
Comment from MissMerri
You have chosen just the right words to make this an especially beautiful haiku, my talented friend! The echoing vowel sounds of the words moonlight and blue, lake and faces, both and aglow... shows a poetic instinct not often seen, but so much enjoyed. I loved this!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2011
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You have chosen just the right words to make this an especially beautiful haiku, my talented friend! The echoing vowel sounds of the words moonlight and blue, lake and faces, both and aglow... shows a poetic instinct not often seen, but so much enjoyed. I loved this!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much, Adonna, for your very kind review and your encouragement. I am always happy when you review my work. Connie :>)
Comment from bard owl
Lovely and romantic. You salute both love light and moonlight that so often compliment each other. Excellent haiku. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Lovely and romantic. You salute both love light and moonlight that so often compliment each other. Excellent haiku. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much, Linda, for your kind review. I didn't win the contest, but I
got some good reviews, and that's what really counts! Thanks again. Connie
Comment from Helvi2
VERY PRETTY! Soft moonlight, romance and glowing faces, paint a lovely picture of love beneath the stars. Your picture evokes the spell of the evening even more.
Very Nice haiku!
Good Luck in the contest :o)
Helvi
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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VERY PRETTY! Soft moonlight, romance and glowing faces, paint a lovely picture of love beneath the stars. Your picture evokes the spell of the evening even more.
Very Nice haiku!
Good Luck in the contest :o)
Helvi
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your time to read and review my poem. I sincerely appreciate it. Connie
Comment from Matoshka
Loved this tender outpouring of love. Your picture and words were so beautiful. I enjoyed this so very much. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Loved this tender outpouring of love. Your picture and words were so beautiful. I enjoyed this so very much. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. :>)
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You are so welcome. It was beautiful. blessings.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Nice, haunting picture, romantic but cerebral to frame your simple, but everlasting message.
You manage to create a mood that invokes serenity.
Nice entry.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Nice, haunting picture, romantic but cerebral to frame your simple, but everlasting message.
You manage to create a mood that invokes serenity.
Nice entry.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it. :>)
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration of lake and lovers'
Wrapped in soft moonlight - what a gentle mood you create with that opening line
this is beautifully romantic and such a great complement to the picture :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration of lake and lovers'
Wrapped in soft moonlight - what a gentle mood you create with that opening line
this is beautifully romantic and such a great complement to the picture :-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Thank you, Brooke, for your very thorough and positive review of my haiku. :>)
Comment from LateBloomer
hello author,
a romantic haiku filled with the sensation of nature as well. very good. the poem reads and flows well, has a good syllable count and great imagery within. of particular note ...
wrapped in soft moonlight
(good line of insight)
this poem made me smile. good luck in the contest.
regards, LateBloomer
(good imagery)
also ...
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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hello author,
a romantic haiku filled with the sensation of nature as well. very good. the poem reads and flows well, has a good syllable count and great imagery within. of particular note ...
wrapped in soft moonlight
(good line of insight)
this poem made me smile. good luck in the contest.
regards, LateBloomer
(good imagery)
also ...
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much, LateBloomer, for such a wonderful review and for those six stars! You've made my day. I am truly, truly grateful. :>)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely romantic haiku, having proper form and syllable count. And it is beautifully presented with the blue colors throughout. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2011
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This is a lovely romantic haiku, having proper form and syllable count. And it is beautifully presented with the blue colors throughout. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 09-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2011
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Thank you, Jeanie, for your encouraging review. I always appreciate it when you read and review my postings. :>)
Comment from Larrypic11
This is a beautiful poem. If it wasn't inspired by the picture, the picture was a great find. Good luck in the contest. Larry
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2011
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This is a beautiful poem. If it wasn't inspired by the picture, the picture was a great find. Good luck in the contest. Larry
Comment Written 09-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2011
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Thank you, Larry. I appreciate your reading and reviewing my haiku. :>)