haiku( jewels of spring)
signs of spring17 total reviews
Comment from G.B. Smith
I love the spring time the best. It is a time when nature puts jack Frost to rest, and allows spring to come forth in all her charm and fragrances. Lovely poem
Bear
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I love the spring time the best. It is a time when nature puts jack Frost to rest, and allows spring to come forth in all her charm and fragrances. Lovely poem
Bear
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
Comment from Connie C
Your haiku is so lovely. I love how you describe "exquisite blooms"
as "jewels of the spring." The picture complements your poem
perfectly. Connie
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Your haiku is so lovely. I love how you describe "exquisite blooms"
as "jewels of the spring." The picture complements your poem
perfectly. Connie
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
Comment from Irish Rose
Great job with this piece. I truly enjoy the comparisons you make with crystals and jewels. Keep up the good work
Rose
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Great job with this piece. I truly enjoy the comparisons you make with crystals and jewels. Keep up the good work
Rose
Comment Written 11-Mar-2011
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
It is most pleasing to visualize those melting snow crystals as they reveal the buds of spring, such exquisite jewels - you create a strong visual and create a lovely upbeat mood : -) Brooke
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
It is most pleasing to visualize those melting snow crystals as they reveal the buds of spring, such exquisite jewels - you create a strong visual and create a lovely upbeat mood : -) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
Comment from Nanny 6
Beautiful display of spring here. The photo compliments your Haiku and gives vivid imagery. Well done, and good luck in the contest. Judy
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Beautiful display of spring here. The photo compliments your Haiku and gives vivid imagery. Well done, and good luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Your referance to jewels accompanied by a floral that could easily represent amethysts and citrines gives this entry more punch.
Good luck.
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Your referance to jewels accompanied by a floral that could easily represent amethysts and citrines gives this entry more punch.
Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
Comment from el twelve
very nicely written, the words had such feelings to them. i can relate because we are in the midst of this season. i love the picture, very colorful.
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very nicely written, the words had such feelings to them. i can relate because we are in the midst of this season. i love the picture, very colorful.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
Comment from katz meow
This is quite an exquisite picture of springtime, the kind of picture I appreciate in my head right now. First two lines are full of vivid imagery, and the last line offers a strong satori. An excellent Haiku. Good luck in the contest...katz meow
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This is quite an exquisite picture of springtime, the kind of picture I appreciate in my head right now. First two lines are full of vivid imagery, and the last line offers a strong satori. An excellent Haiku. Good luck in the contest...katz meow
Comment Written 10-Mar-2011
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is lovely combined winter and spring imagery. It is well written and beautifully presented. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
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This is lovely combined winter and spring imagery. It is well written and beautifully presented. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 09-Mar-2011
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this haiku about the jewels of spring waiting to burst forth, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this haiku about the jewels of spring waiting to burst forth, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Mar-2011