A Tale of Lillian Grace Revised
A children's Picture Book22 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow , agreat job writing this story about lilly and her friends, i enjoyed reading it. you need to make all of the names Lilly or Lily, you keep changing the spelling of the heroine.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow , agreat job writing this story about lilly and her friends, i enjoyed reading it. you need to make all of the names Lilly or Lily, you keep changing the spelling of the heroine.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from Writeaway...
I do hope you include some art into this piece eliz, this is a cute story for children and you held me from beginning to end. I cannot suggest anything for improvmemnt, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2011
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I do hope you include some art into this piece eliz, this is a cute story for children and you held me from beginning to end. I cannot suggest anything for improvmemnt, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
