Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from New Day Rising
Very contemplative piece of free verse, i wrote one about Time also, even used the same color choice,LOL. There is a quote I read long ago that relates to time and people. "Millions long for immortality, yet don't know what to do on a rainy Sunday afternoon". Times a wasting, looks like I need to read one more of yours before i go for the day. Write on.
Robert
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Very contemplative piece of free verse, i wrote one about Time also, even used the same color choice,LOL. There is a quote I read long ago that relates to time and people. "Millions long for immortality, yet don't know what to do on a rainy Sunday afternoon". Times a wasting, looks like I need to read one more of yours before i go for the day. Write on.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Jan-2005
Comment from Graceheart
Time may heal some wounds, yet only cover others with its sands. Beautifully written, and very thought provoking. You are a very wise soul Jewel. Your insights here are right on the mark. Great from start to finish, superb ending!
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Time may heal some wounds, yet only cover others with its sands. Beautifully written, and very thought provoking. You are a very wise soul Jewel. Your insights here are right on the mark. Great from start to finish, superb ending!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2004
Comment from Miss Sarah
This is a very nice poem, full of great imagery. I think you should re-think the form a little bit. The spacing between each line seems a little strange. Overall, this is a nice piece.
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This is a very nice poem, full of great imagery. I think you should re-think the form a little bit. The spacing between each line seems a little strange. Overall, this is a nice piece.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2004
Comment from Dklrdmcches
I love free verse. It is the only way to go, and you did an outstanding job on this. The flow was fantastic and I felt every line. Once again, great job
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I love free verse. It is the only way to go, and you did an outstanding job on this. The flow was fantastic and I felt every line. Once again, great job
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004
Comment from kutebs
My goodness, what the truth in your writing entails. On one hand, we do long for more time, but on the flip side sometimes complain about too much time at hand. Your writing always seem to reach something in me. Reminds me of something, allows me to reflect, always something.
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My goodness, what the truth in your writing entails. On one hand, we do long for more time, but on the flip side sometimes complain about too much time at hand. Your writing always seem to reach something in me. Reminds me of something, allows me to reflect, always something.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
It does not heal all wounds. We learn how to deal with them through the passage of time but the wound is never truly healed. Another excellent piece of writing. I just love these lunch breaks you give to me. Thanks so much, my friend.
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It does not heal all wounds. We learn how to deal with them through the passage of time but the wound is never truly healed. Another excellent piece of writing. I just love these lunch breaks you give to me. Thanks so much, my friend.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004
Comment from jannieballiett
Great simile with the time and healing, and yes, it's never right, is it? Too much, not enough, never satisfied....but, that's human nature, unfortunately.
Great writing, as always..
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Great simile with the time and healing, and yes, it's never right, is it? Too much, not enough, never satisfied....but, that's human nature, unfortunately.
Great writing, as always..
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004
Comment from Marillion
A good question, Jewell, and I don't know that any of us have the answer, except in our own experiences. I don't necessarily think that it heals, but it does scar and make less painful. Anyway, as you can tell, it made me think, and that is good poetry to me. Well done.
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A good question, Jewell, and I don't know that any of us have the answer, except in our own experiences. I don't necessarily think that it heals, but it does scar and make less painful. Anyway, as you can tell, it made me think, and that is good poetry to me. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004
Comment from purpleveil
This is an interesting poem, short, sweet, and to the point. It makes me want to say "how true!" I didn't find anything that I didn't like about it.
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This is an interesting poem, short, sweet, and to the point. It makes me want to say "how true!" I didn't find anything that I didn't like about it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2004