The 23rd Psalms and 1/2
destruction and redemption34 total reviews
Comment from Terry wrote
This poem conveys both the hollow horrors of depression and the quiet acceptance of faith. It is crafted so carefully, with scripture and responses echoing their mirrored relationships. Your author note it so on target - wander as you will. I will be back to re-read this often. I'm going to put this on my "bookshelf" (if I can figure out how.)
Thank you for sharing this with so many here.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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This poem conveys both the hollow horrors of depression and the quiet acceptance of faith. It is crafted so carefully, with scripture and responses echoing their mirrored relationships. Your author note it so on target - wander as you will. I will be back to re-read this often. I'm going to put this on my "bookshelf" (if I can figure out how.)
Thank you for sharing this with so many here.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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I want to thank you from the best part of me for not only the rating but for truly understanding what this one is about. It isn't pretty and I was not sure where it came from, but it would seem others needed it as much as I did. Thank you again so honored you thought it was worth such a high rating. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Charles Dale
Very well done and spoken in truth. God has raised Joyce up in this hour to reach people like you and many others. My wife has her latest book and draws strength from her program.
Your poem is good and well thought out. Runs like a deer.
Nicely done poet.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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Very well done and spoken in truth. God has raised Joyce up in this hour to reach people like you and many others. My wife has her latest book and draws strength from her program.
Your poem is good and well thought out. Runs like a deer.
Nicely done poet.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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this one was written by my hand but came from some other place. thank you for your review and thoughts. they mean a lot to me. xoxo deborah
Comment from InterestingRon
Great title - and concept.
You've played Devil's Advocate with the 23rd Psalm. Each line praising the Lord answered with what many would consider reality - or Satan's retort!
Your downbeat theme is uplifted by your additional 1/2. A statement of where your faith lies.
One suggestion: I haven't a clue who Joyce Meyer is? To save readers like me doing research - maybe an author's note would help?
A wonderful presentation showcasing your words.
Ron xox
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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Great title - and concept.
You've played Devil's Advocate with the 23rd Psalm. Each line praising the Lord answered with what many would consider reality - or Satan's retort!
Your downbeat theme is uplifted by your additional 1/2. A statement of where your faith lies.
One suggestion: I haven't a clue who Joyce Meyer is? To save readers like me doing research - maybe an author's note would help?
A wonderful presentation showcasing your words.
Ron xox
Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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thank you Ron for this incredible honor you give to me. This was one of those writes that come from your hand but you don't know how. It seemed important to say to many and especially to me. Thank you again Ron for the confidence you have in me personally and as a writer. xoxo deborah
Comment from laren
A great poem, more than that is a testimony ofauthor's faith , very well written and well documented.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Congratulations!
Laren
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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A great poem, more than that is a testimony ofauthor's faith , very well written and well documented.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Congratulations!
Laren
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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Quiero que sepan que valoro lo que tengo que decir de éste como 19 personas más habÃa visto ya en ella y leà rápidamente por que a pesar de que no significaba nada. Tu comentario me dio la esperanza de que tal vez yo habÃa escrito algo digno de leer y pensar. Se lo agradezco mucho. gracias desde el fondo de mi corazón. deborah xoxo.
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When I read your poem I feel hope.
Thank you for sharing,
Laren
