Missing You
My thoughts this morning as I journaled my prayers25 total reviews
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Author, this is so touching. The love shines through. You even think of asking God to give your husband something to do as you know he cannot be idle. I'm sorry for your loss, but as a story this is awesome.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Hi, Author, this is so touching. The love shines through. You even think of asking God to give your husband something to do as you know he cannot be idle. I'm sorry for your loss, but as a story this is awesome.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you Belinda. I really appreciate your comments and the excellent review.
Comment from BethShelby
I am so sorry you are losing you husband. I hope he is not suffering too much. He is lucky to have a loving wife and to ready to go and have complete faith that he is in God's loving hands. You must be a very stong person with a strong faith of your own. My prayers are with you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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I am so sorry you are losing you husband. I hope he is not suffering too much. He is lucky to have a loving wife and to ready to go and have complete faith that he is in God's loving hands. You must be a very stong person with a strong faith of your own. My prayers are with you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you BethShelby. Your words are kind. Thanks too for the excellent rating.
Comment from Yeti777
Great story telling in this piece. You've managed to keep a nice sentence structure while keeping a solid brevity in your lines. This allows the reader's mind and eyes to breath with the piece making this an enjoyable read. Sean
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Great story telling in this piece. You've managed to keep a nice sentence structure while keeping a solid brevity in your lines. This allows the reader's mind and eyes to breath with the piece making this an enjoyable read. Sean
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you, Sean. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from KATYBUG:)
this is an awesome short non fiction story!
i remember thoes times too
or have yet to live through them
i love your picture
best of luck in the contest
love
katy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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this is an awesome short non fiction story!
i remember thoes times too
or have yet to live through them
i love your picture
best of luck in the contest
love
katy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Katy, thank you so much for the excellent review.
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your very welcome:)
Comment from warbler
Your story is full of deep emotional feelings. I enjoyed reading it because it is so well written. I am sorry for what you are dealing with. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Your story is full of deep emotional feelings. I enjoyed reading it because it is so well written. I am sorry for what you are dealing with. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you, Warbler, for the excellent rating and the wonderful comments.
Comment from JudithMarie
This is a great autobiographical entry filled with memories and emotions. The reader is drawn in at the very beginning and experiences all kinds of emotions from great sadness to happy times all entwined with love. Faith obviously gives comfort, peace, and hope. Well written...a winner! JudithMarie
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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This is a great autobiographical entry filled with memories and emotions. The reader is drawn in at the very beginning and experiences all kinds of emotions from great sadness to happy times all entwined with love. Faith obviously gives comfort, peace, and hope. Well written...a winner! JudithMarie
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much Judy. I treasure your kind words.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
The reason I deducted one star from my rating is that you do not begin the story with "I remember," as the contest rules specify. This would be very easy to fix. Perhaps you might begin with, "I remember worshipping with my husband...." (Let me know if you edit it and I will also edit my rating to 5 stars.)
This is so touching and so real. I'm so glad you have the resource of prayer through which to channel your thoughts and feelings. And thank you for sharing them with we who read them as well. My heart goes out to you as you go through this painful process of losing your husband for a little while. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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The reason I deducted one star from my rating is that you do not begin the story with "I remember," as the contest rules specify. This would be very easy to fix. Perhaps you might begin with, "I remember worshipping with my husband...." (Let me know if you edit it and I will also edit my rating to 5 stars.)
This is so touching and so real. I'm so glad you have the resource of prayer through which to channel your thoughts and feelings. And thank you for sharing them with we who read them as well. My heart goes out to you as you go through this painful process of losing your husband for a little while. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks for the heads up. I totally missed that "I remember" part of the qualifications. I guess winning isn't all that important to me. I appreciate your kinds words.
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Your new first line is just perfect! (I have edited my rating to five stars.) JM
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
A beautifully written, though very sad story of your loving husband. Lovely presentation as well. However, you will need to make some changes in order to qualify for this contest, as the rules state you must BEGIN your story with "I remember.." which you have forgotten to do? Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Betty
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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A beautifully written, though very sad story of your loving husband. Lovely presentation as well. However, you will need to make some changes in order to qualify for this contest, as the rules state you must BEGIN your story with "I remember.." which you have forgotten to do? Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Betty
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2011
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Thanks for the heads up. I totally missed that "I remember" part of the qualifications. Thank you for reviewing and your kind words.
Comment from adewpearl
The section where you ask God what jobs he will have for Dave in heaven really resonated with me - you're so right - I cannot imagine paradise is a place where folks just sit idle and watch the clouds roll by. LOL I love the jobs you figure he would excel at :-)
I am so very sorry your husband is so gravely ill. I will keep both of you in my thoughts and prayers. Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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The section where you ask God what jobs he will have for Dave in heaven really resonated with me - you're so right - I cannot imagine paradise is a place where folks just sit idle and watch the clouds roll by. LOL I love the jobs you figure he would excel at :-)
I am so very sorry your husband is so gravely ill. I will keep both of you in my thoughts and prayers. Brooke
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you, Brooke. Your words encourage me greatly. Thank you for the excellent review and for your prayers.
Comment from MizKat
Oh, your story is written so well and tells such a loving, but sad story. Because of your faith you are able to be strong as you watch your husband die. I don't doubt that this story will win the contest. Kat
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Oh, your story is written so well and tells such a loving, but sad story. Because of your faith you are able to be strong as you watch your husband die. I don't doubt that this story will win the contest. Kat
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much Kat. I appreciate your comments and encouragement. Thank you again.
