The Boxer
True Story - Contest Entry29 total reviews
Comment from lola29
Your poem is wonderful. I don't think most people stop to consider how dangerous the sport of boxing really is. I could never imagine stepping into a ring with those men of steel.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Your poem is wonderful. I don't think most people stop to consider how dangerous the sport of boxing really is. I could never imagine stepping into a ring with those men of steel.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks Lola for your review. It takes a strong willed person with a strong desire to stay with this sport and make a career
out of it. My desire was not that stong and it didn't take very long to realize that. I decided after awhile that I just wanted a normal job with a normal life. Thanks my friend. Cedar/Bill
Comment from InHisownwrite
A look at the boxer that we wouldn't always be fortunate to have a look at..
First hand...
I guess we have many desires that sometimes don't come to pass...
In this sense, you came to your senses as far as a personal walk in the boxing field...
But, you never lost your love....
A very intersting view..
Bryan
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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A look at the boxer that we wouldn't always be fortunate to have a look at..
First hand...
I guess we have many desires that sometimes don't come to pass...
In this sense, you came to your senses as far as a personal walk in the boxing field...
But, you never lost your love....
A very intersting view..
Bryan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks Bryan for your review. I don't have any regrets that this
dream did not come true. Boxing is a brutal sport, it takes a strong desire to stay with it, mine was not that strong. Thanks my friend. Cedar/Bill
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You're welcome..Bryan
Comment from percival86jack
I used to be such a fan of all sports and boxing was among them. Today, I look at the sport and only think how senseless and brutal it is. It's been around since Roman times but it seems to be losing its appeal and popularity. Muhammed Ali is a hero of mine... for his boxing skills, but more for being an outstanding and courageous human being! An excellent write, my friend... cheers, Jack
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I used to be such a fan of all sports and boxing was among them. Today, I look at the sport and only think how senseless and brutal it is. It's been around since Roman times but it seems to be losing its appeal and popularity. Muhammed Ali is a hero of mine... for his boxing skills, but more for being an outstanding and courageous human being! An excellent write, my friend... cheers, Jack
Comment Written 08-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you Jack for your wonderful review. Ali is definitely a character, even today with Parkinsons. Take care. Cedar/Bill
Comment from The Stranger
As a Parkinsons disease patient myself, I know only too well of Ali and his battle, you are right to avoid a sport that is only there purely to inflict injury
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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As a Parkinsons disease patient myself, I know only too well of Ali and his battle, you are right to avoid a sport that is only there purely to inflict injury
Comment Written 08-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your review my friend. It is a brutal sport. Hope you're feeling better. Cedar/Bill
Comment from Slush Pile
When we're on top, we shine and smile. Then 30 years later, our memories are so powerful of those good times that we make foolish mistakes. It's only human. Blessings, Slush Pile (denny)
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When we're on top, we shine and smile. Then 30 years later, our memories are so powerful of those good times that we make foolish mistakes. It's only human. Blessings, Slush Pile (denny)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks Denny for your review. You're right, things have a way of catching up with you. Cedar/Bill
Comment from chrissy8
Sorry it's a goal you didn't reach, but your health is more important. I don't even think Muhammed can speak anymore, can he? Well written poem and you did what you set out to do for the contest. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Sorry it's a goal you didn't reach, but your health is more important. I don't even think Muhammed can speak anymore, can he? Well written poem and you did what you set out to do for the contest. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your review. No, Ali cannot speak. He barely can stand and shakes really bad. No luck in the contest. Cedar/Bill
Comment from tango494
How sad that you never realized your dream, but your noise is probably straight. I love this poem, your words and creativeness is to be commended. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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How sad that you never realized your dream, but your noise is probably straight. I love this poem, your words and creativeness is to be commended. Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Boxing is a brutal sport. Have a great day. Cedar/Bill
Comment from Maxine Kendall
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
You certainly have incorporated the writing prompt in this very creative piece.
Thanks for the interesting info in the author notes too.
Well done and good luck.
Maxine
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I really enjoyed reading your poem.
You certainly have incorporated the writing prompt in this very creative piece.
Thanks for the interesting info in the author notes too.
Well done and good luck.
Maxine
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks Maxine for your review. No luck in the contest. Have a great day. Cedar/Bill
Comment from Majicman
You certainly have achieved the requirements of the contest using the colours, 'black and blue'. And it became more alive, knowing that it was based on a real life desire.
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You certainly have achieved the requirements of the contest using the colours, 'black and blue'. And it became more alive, knowing that it was based on a real life desire.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your great review, but no luck in the contest.
Thanks anyway. Cedar/Bill
Comment from Winslow
Dear Poet,
A color infused description of the pugalistic sport. Black and blue all over doesn't sound very good to me. The color of money in boxing is an ever present presence.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Dear Poet,
A color infused description of the pugalistic sport. Black and blue all over doesn't sound very good to me. The color of money in boxing is an ever present presence.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thanks Winslow for your great review, I appreciate it. Take care. Cedar/Bill
