Out of My Hands
This poem tells the current state of my life28 total reviews
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Nice poem.
Flows well.
I like your rhymes.
Wonderful message.
Powerful.
Heartfelt.
Wonderful title.
I like the image you chose for it.
I send you a hug.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Nice poem.
Flows well.
I like your rhymes.
Wonderful message.
Powerful.
Heartfelt.
Wonderful title.
I like the image you chose for it.
I send you a hug.
Kathryn
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Kathryn, Hugs are so appreciated during this time of isolation with the outside world. I am grateful for FanStory and the folks I can share with here. Your review makes me smile.
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you're welcome. Hang in there.
Kathryn
Comment from bowls
I'm so sorry that you find yourself in this situation, but I'm glad that your faith allows you to believe you'll be with your husband again. You tell the story well, taking your reader through the steps of your discovery of your husband's cancer to your current state. I wish the two of you all the happiness you can muster.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I'm so sorry that you find yourself in this situation, but I'm glad that your faith allows you to believe you'll be with your husband again. You tell the story well, taking your reader through the steps of your discovery of your husband's cancer to your current state. I wish the two of you all the happiness you can muster.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for this generous rating and your kind words. Blessings to you this beautiful Sunday morning.
Comment from Lady Jane
Well said, though sad, and all encompassing ... the hurt and sorrow must be and that is what came through in this very poignant, yet uplifting piece. The knowledge of knowing you will be together again is a very comforting thought no doubt. The poem is smooth, crisp, and written well. No errors to note and the presentation is flawless to boot. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Well said, though sad, and all encompassing ... the hurt and sorrow must be and that is what came through in this very poignant, yet uplifting piece. The knowledge of knowing you will be together again is a very comforting thought no doubt. The poem is smooth, crisp, and written well. No errors to note and the presentation is flawless to boot. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for the well wishes and the wonderful review. Blessings to you.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
I am so sorry you are having to experience this but I am
so glad the two of you are people of faith as I really
don't know how people who don't have that get through times
like this -- it is only in the knowing I will one day rejoin my loved ones who have already passed on before me and that I will get to meet Jesus in person that I am able to continue in this life
thanks for sharing
Godspeed to you
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I am so sorry you are having to experience this but I am
so glad the two of you are people of faith as I really
don't know how people who don't have that get through times
like this -- it is only in the knowing I will one day rejoin my loved ones who have already passed on before me and that I will get to meet Jesus in person that I am able to continue in this life
thanks for sharing
Godspeed to you
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you Jan, your generous rating and kind review make my spirit light this Sunday morning. It is also my birthday.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Author; It is a sad day when anyone hears the word 'cancer'and it has to do with themselves or a loved one. The poem is written with great care, and the reader goes on the journey and can only pray with your husband. ~patty~
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Dear Author; It is a sad day when anyone hears the word 'cancer'and it has to do with themselves or a loved one. The poem is written with great care, and the reader goes on the journey and can only pray with your husband. ~patty~
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you Patty. Your kind and generous rating gives me grins this morning.
Comment from S.Yocom
I am truly sorry for the distress that you and your husband are going through now. Cancer is a terrible thing. I admire your courage in writing this moving poem, and you both have my best wishes.
Sally
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I am truly sorry for the distress that you and your husband are going through now. Cancer is a terrible thing. I admire your courage in writing this moving poem, and you both have my best wishes.
Sally
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Sally, thank you so much for the wonderful rating and the kind comments.
Comment from fluffnstuff
Oh my goodness...what a hard one to rate. I'd just rather come flying through and give you a big hug and share a tear or two. I'm Sorry dianne
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Oh my goodness...what a hard one to rate. I'd just rather come flying through and give you a big hug and share a tear or two. I'm Sorry dianne
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Dianne, Hugs are accepted and appreciated. Thank you so much for the read and review. Your comments lift my spirits this morning.
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ur so welcome...anytime
Comment from rlonsdale
As someone who's had chemo & been diagnosed with three different Cancers (the first when I was nineteen & that's when i had chemo)...i can understand it's not worth the time it buys. It's better to live shorter life happy than longer in pain. Good luck to you guys. This was very beautiful despite the subject matter and uplifting also. When I was going through this I was glad it was me & not my wife/mom/sister cause ...I think as hard as it is...it's harder to watch someone you love go through it. Your words are inspiring though and you have the right attitude. be strong & good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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As someone who's had chemo & been diagnosed with three different Cancers (the first when I was nineteen & that's when i had chemo)...i can understand it's not worth the time it buys. It's better to live shorter life happy than longer in pain. Good luck to you guys. This was very beautiful despite the subject matter and uplifting also. When I was going through this I was glad it was me & not my wife/mom/sister cause ...I think as hard as it is...it's harder to watch someone you love go through it. Your words are inspiring though and you have the right attitude. be strong & good luck.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Wow, thank you for wise comments that only someone who has been there could have made. I am glad you have survived three different cancers. That is incredible. Blessings to you in your future too. Thanks for this awesome review and rating.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem of praise and belief, even in a time of trial. i am glad you put the bible scripture there, i wish you the best of luck in the contest, and i pray for comfort and rest for both of you
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem of praise and belief, even in a time of trial. i am glad you put the bible scripture there, i wish you the best of luck in the contest, and i pray for comfort and rest for both of you
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much, for everything, especially the prayers.
Comment from Katiesherrill
I have to give this a six. The flow was smooth and the story is sad but sweet. I love the hope you share in the lines. Yes you both will retire together one day after all. Thank you for writing this.
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I have to give this a six. The flow was smooth and the story is sad but sweet. I love the hope you share in the lines. Yes you both will retire together one day after all. Thank you for writing this.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thanks, this six canceled the four I got. LOL It was fun to write and it just feels good to share my faith in this manner. Thanks for the six, -
