Holiday and Holyday Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Valentine"religious and holiday poetry
3 total reviews
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Dove,
This is very romantic and sweet. I think you did a great job writing this acrostic. The words within are very touching.
Nice job my friend, :o)
Helvi
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Hi Dove,
This is very romantic and sweet. I think you did a great job writing this acrostic. The words within are very touching.
Nice job my friend, :o)
Helvi
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Hi Helvi! I hope the poem got into the contest! I was having trouble with submit the entry yesterday. Dove
Comment from poetbear
I like the alliteration and the flow. You use poetic technique and device very well.
Something is missing that would make it a five?
In my innermost being?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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I like the alliteration and the flow. You use poetic technique and device very well.
Something is missing that would make it a five?
In my innermost being?
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Dear poetbear, Thank you for your review.
Comment from ILAGolden
This is a sweet little poem. Loves first bloom rolling into something more. It's kind of how I'm feeling right now lol. So I liked this.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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This is a sweet little poem. Loves first bloom rolling into something more. It's kind of how I'm feeling right now lol. So I liked this.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Dear ILAGolden, Thank you for your review.
