Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "My Angel, I think!"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from missy98writer
Carol,
Long time no read. How are you doing. Your flash fiction is very well written. In a bare minimum of words for the greatest you've effectively created a setting, conflict, and a resolve to your story. You even use the required words in a choesive story. I loved reading and reviewing. Your flash fiction was an excellent piece of writing. It is a shame you didn't win the 100 Word Story writing prompt. Your art work is lovely. May God keep blessing you and your pen.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Carol,
Long time no read. How are you doing. Your flash fiction is very well written. In a bare minimum of words for the greatest you've effectively created a setting, conflict, and a resolve to your story. You even use the required words in a choesive story. I loved reading and reviewing. Your flash fiction was an excellent piece of writing. It is a shame you didn't win the 100 Word Story writing prompt. Your art work is lovely. May God keep blessing you and your pen.
Melissa.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Hi Missy...Haven't been on FS for a long time and truly missed all of you. Hopefully I can get myself together and return to the things I loved...especially writing.
Comment from RobinWrites
Loved this! There is vivid imagery with so few words and the story it tells is one many of us have been through. Great Job!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Loved this! There is vivid imagery with so few words and the story it tells is one many of us have been through. Great Job!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tillom Gliss
LOL! "I'm not already dead?"
LOL, again! "You'll wish you were in the morning."
I thought this was a well written flash fiction piece from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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LOL! "I'm not already dead?"
LOL, again! "You'll wish you were in the morning."
I thought this was a well written flash fiction piece from beginning to end.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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OMgoodness! Of course it would! I am so sorry to hear of this...I hope your honey is okay now and that 2011 brings joy and a lot less stress! With love, Jo
Comment from IndianaIrish
I enjoyed your short story and found you used the required words well without sounding forced or goofy. Jake's gonna have a doozy of a headache all day. Best of luck!
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed your short story and found you used the required words well without sounding forced or goofy. Jake's gonna have a doozy of a headache all day. Best of luck!
Indy :>)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this story about the perils of drinking--parents don't take too well to that. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this story about the perils of drinking--parents don't take too well to that. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
Comment from bowls
Good use of the required words. Interesting title. I guess it has several meanings. He at first thinks he's dead, so he believes it is an angel, and secondly, the person helping him home might not be an angel because he might have Hell to pay when he gets there. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Good use of the required words. Interesting title. I guess it has several meanings. He at first thinks he's dead, so he believes it is an angel, and secondly, the person helping him home might not be an angel because he might have Hell to pay when he gets there. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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I'm so sorry to hear of your trouble. I hope 2011 will improve your situation.
Comment from Sallyo
Oh dear! You managed to tell quite a tale in the short length allowed and used all the words with good effect. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Oh dear! You managed to tell quite a tale in the short length allowed and used all the words with good effect. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
Comment from JW
Ah. The penalities of drinking. it seems to always lead one into trouble. For being flash fiction you developed a great scene. One can almost imagine what is going to happen next.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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Ah. The penalities of drinking. it seems to always lead one into trouble. For being flash fiction you developed a great scene. One can almost imagine what is going to happen next.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Writingfundimension
You put together a very original and enjoyable contest entry here. Great dialogue and setting the scene. Should be a strong contender in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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You put together a very original and enjoyable contest entry here. Great dialogue and setting the scene. Should be a strong contender in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
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Glad things are looking up for you Carol. Best wishes, too , in the New Year. Bev
Comment from RKagan
You did a great job of writing a full story using the required words. The plot was interesting and the characters were well rounded. That's hard to do in such a short piece. great job.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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You did a great job of writing a full story using the required words. The plot was interesting and the characters were well rounded. That's hard to do in such a short piece. great job.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2011
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My sincere apologies for neglecting to thank you and for copying this message..a house fire on Christmas morning and four surgeries on my honey since November seems to have put the rest of my life on hold..I sincerely appreciate your time and comments...Hope to be back writing soon. Happy New Year and wishing you the best in 2011...Smiles, Carol
