The Pink Mitten
112 word micro flash30 total reviews
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
a lovely story with good flow and all that snow good GOd I would die if I lived where you are. a good write and most enjoyable. MARY
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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a lovely story with good flow and all that snow good GOd I would die if I lived where you are. a good write and most enjoyable. MARY
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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HI Mary! It's bad this year! AND the weather channel said we would have a MILD winter! HA! It's horrible. Thanks for this kind review...it's great to hear from you! SOMEDAY, I am going to see about my facebook! ") Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this story about trying to find a car buried under a snow drift, i have to believe it was in time
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this story about trying to find a car buried under a snow drift, i have to believe it was in time
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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") Hi there! Yes, I am sure too. Just wanted a bit of mystery. Thank you for this kind review Sweetwood. ") HOPE you are keeping warm! ") Susan
Comment from BethShelby
You are very good at telling a story in few words. Hopefully the tow truck got there in time. It could easily be too late for someone stuck in the snow with temperatures unless they have enough wraps to keep them warm. Winter can be brutal. It was 20 here today but it felt like 7 degrees because we had a strong north wind. I think we're returned to the ice age.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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You are very good at telling a story in few words. Hopefully the tow truck got there in time. It could easily be too late for someone stuck in the snow with temperatures unless they have enough wraps to keep them warm. Winter can be brutal. It was 20 here today but it felt like 7 degrees because we had a strong north wind. I think we're returned to the ice age.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Yes, us too! I can't stand being outdoors. It's really brutal on the animals too. We have all the water heaters on, and yes, the wind is awful! Stay in and safe Beth!? Thanks too, for this kind review! ") Susan
Comment from misscookie
The artwork tells the story.
Brrrrrr Only because I know what kind of wheather you are having I could sense what your writing about. thats a good survived idea the pink glove. is this a true story?
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The artwork tells the story.
Brrrrrr Only because I know what kind of wheather you are having I could sense what your writing about. thats a good survived idea the pink glove. is this a true story?
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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No, and yes, it has happened , just not to me or us. Up in Chicago, this is common. Thank you Cookie for a kind review.! HUGS, Susan
Comment from anne1204
Interesting little story. We think we have it bad here in the South with temps in the teens. We have no snow or ice. I few snow flurries yesterday but nothing stayed on the ground. Be careful up there in the blizzard. Anne 1204
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Interesting little story. We think we have it bad here in the South with temps in the teens. We have no snow or ice. I few snow flurries yesterday but nothing stayed on the ground. Be careful up there in the blizzard. Anne 1204
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi Anne, thank you. We try, it's so slick, hard to drive...I sure hate this weather! You be careful too! ") Thank you for this kind review! xoxo. Susan
Comment from BarnCat
Timely story geven the weather of late, Susan. I liked that the ending was left open -- some will find the glass falf empty and others half full. Great economy of words to convey this story.
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Timely story geven the weather of late, Susan. I liked that the ending was left open -- some will find the glass falf empty and others half full. Great economy of words to convey this story.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi Deb! Thank you! Do you know if I need an apostaphe in trucks? I will put it in, I do NOT know, how I hate apostaphes. Thanks for reading this for me! I hope you are keeping warm! We are in a real cold snap! ") How is the little kitten? S.
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Hey -- truck's radio needs the aspotrophe. Reggie is very funny and is starting to like me a little better. He LOVES his brother Ben.
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Oh good, he will be okay! ")
Comment from Cedar
This is an exciting piece of writing. It grabs the readers
attention. It is also a dangerous situation, one that
many face every winter. The tow truck did make it on time and everyone is safe and sound.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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This is an exciting piece of writing. It grabs the readers
attention. It is also a dangerous situation, one that
many face every winter. The tow truck did make it on time and everyone is safe and sound.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi Cedar! Thank you so much! You have a positive attitude! Good for you! This really happens but this is just a story! So good to hear from you! Susan
Comment from x-cheshire-puss-x
I love how you left this up to interpretation! I love in New York City, where we get a lot of snow, so it was easy enough to identify with the themes. All in all, a very good story!
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I love how you left this up to interpretation! I love in New York City, where we get a lot of snow, so it was easy enough to identify with the themes. All in all, a very good story!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi there! IT's neat to "meet" a NewYorker! Wow. It's cold there too. Do you walk a lot? I would die...I walk our dog with the atv here, especially in cold weather. Altho, zipping around makes a wind chill worse in your face! ") Thank you for reading this and reviewing it too!! ") Susan
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Yeah... We don't own a car, so I walk everywhere, all the time.
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AHhhh! I would DIE> but, it's good for you to walk I guess. Wow. Stay safe and warm?? Susan
Comment from lisasolorio1
Well if you leave it up to me I would make a big dramatic exit. But thats me and that would keep me wanting to read more. The little bit you wrote I portrayed in my head. Even though I would of liked to have read more I appreciate what I read. Happy Holidays to you.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Well if you leave it up to me I would make a big dramatic exit. But thats me and that would keep me wanting to read more. The little bit you wrote I portrayed in my head. Even though I would of liked to have read more I appreciate what I read. Happy Holidays to you.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi Lisa! Thank you! Read a review for this by "TryBuck" , you will laugh! I like your idea too! These flash stories are supposed to end quickly...I am trying to learn them. Read E.P. Thomas' work if you like short stories. He is super! Thanks for reading this for me too!! ") Susan
Comment from markk
Excellent short story and well told with a good purpose to it. I enjoyed it and found myself wondering what had happened to those in the car. well done.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Excellent short story and well told with a good purpose to it. I enjoyed it and found myself wondering what had happened to those in the car. well done.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hi Markk! Thanks for this kind review...I wanted you to decide for yourself? Maybe I shouldn't , but I like open ended stories? Sometimes! Nice to hear from you! Susan
