Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Love is a Mystery"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
26 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well written and truly uplifting in content. Though simple in construction, the message is expressed powerfully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is well written and truly uplifting in content. Though simple in construction, the message is expressed powerfully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It is really positive and encouraging and I really appreciate it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are romantic and loving words in your beautiful well rhymed poem with a smooth flow and a joyful sentiment, every word is true, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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These are romantic and loving words in your beautiful well rhymed poem with a smooth flow and a joyful sentiment, every word is true, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your delightful review of my poem and your insight and depth are thrilling. It is interesting that you mention romance and I agree but the poem just came to me this way and I just wrote it down.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Poet says love is mystery, for he finds love comes and goes, sometime it becomes invisible, it delights to live, and again it is a heavenly bliss, and it is like a blooming flower in the spring; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Poet says love is mystery, for he finds love comes and goes, sometime it becomes invisible, it delights to live, and again it is a heavenly bliss, and it is like a blooming flower in the spring; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Glad you enjoyed to read it and found it a good write. Yes, love goes a long; long way.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is poetry at its very best.
I find no grammar issues.
And, it flowed and read well.
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As I got further into it, I realized that the intensity of the Them a and Imagery worked well with the Descriptive Measures.
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Overall, Adjective and Objective Contents, were gracefully placed.
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Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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This is poetry at its very best.
I find no grammar issues.
And, it flowed and read well.
...
As I got further into it, I realized that the intensity of the Them a and Imagery worked well with the Descriptive Measures.
...
Overall, Adjective and Objective Contents, were gracefully placed.
....
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and informative review, it was truly helpful and encouraging.
Comment from country ranch writer
Love comes in all shapes and sizes one size doesn't fit all. Love is a many splendid thing when it is tight for all. It can be soft, sweet, deeply felt, or it can turn ugly and melt.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Love comes in all shapes and sizes one size doesn't fit all. Love is a many splendid thing when it is tight for all. It can be soft, sweet, deeply felt, or it can turn ugly and melt.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your good review - I really appreciate your comments about my writing and about love about love. Real love doesn't get ugly or angry because there's no such thing in Jesús, He's perfect as stated in the Bible.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gudbjorg, Your poem is beautifully penned, and I can feel the love and joy within. I especially liked:
Love is such a mysterious thing,
it comes and goes, but always is.
(Indeed, it does.)
Also:
like a living substance in the rain.
(Thought provoking)
Good rhyming scheme. Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hello Gudbjorg, Your poem is beautifully penned, and I can feel the love and joy within. I especially liked:
Love is such a mysterious thing,
it comes and goes, but always is.
(Indeed, it does.)
Also:
like a living substance in the rain.
(Thought provoking)
Good rhyming scheme. Lovely artwork choice. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for taking your time to review my poems and giving me such good reviews.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi,
Thank you for sharing this beautiful love poem. There certainly are different types of love and the 'giving love' you've described within the lines of your poem is a keeper.
I was a bit confused about the rhyme scheme - but I imagine you had your reasons.
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hi,
Thank you for sharing this beautiful love poem. There certainly are different types of love and the 'giving love' you've described within the lines of your poem is a keeper.
I was a bit confused about the rhyme scheme - but I imagine you had your reasons.
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review and I'm so thankful for you taking the time to evaluate them. Well, regarding the rhyme scheme you're right I had my reasons for leaving it this way. It came to me this way.
Comment from royowen
A nicely written poem in 9 and 8 syllable per line, well timed and smooth, a great narrative, philosophically good, the couplet rhyming is first class, the meter smooth and easy to read, the poem is an all round solid work, well done. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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A nicely written poem in 9 and 8 syllable per line, well timed and smooth, a great narrative, philosophically good, the couplet rhyming is first class, the meter smooth and easy to read, the poem is an all round solid work, well done. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic review, it really touched my heart.
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Most welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes love is always there within you ready to find a subject to bestow it on if only you see it. It is good that you show the joy and the pain of love.
The poem has a good meter but the 'is' in the first stanza seems to be the only word the doesn't even slant rhyme with the other end rhymes. Eyes and mine, though not full rhyme, do seem to be a slant rhyme.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Yes love is always there within you ready to find a subject to bestow it on if only you see it. It is good that you show the joy and the pain of love.
The poem has a good meter but the 'is' in the first stanza seems to be the only word the doesn't even slant rhyme with the other end rhymes. Eyes and mine, though not full rhyme, do seem to be a slant rhyme.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your informative review, i really appreciate your detailed analysis of my poem. I'm fully aware of this word you mentioned "is" that doesn't even have a slant rhyme. I haven't changed it because that's how it first come to me in the spirit. Nevertheless even though it doesn't rhyme it sill has a beautiful flow to it. Well, I'm not claiming I know a lot about these technical things but what the Lord gives me!
Thanks again for sharing this important principls of maning poetry
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You're welcome. You are right about the flow.
dragonpoet
Comment from AnnieDawn
A very spiritual meaning to your poem. I liked the color and picture that you selected to go with it. A good read. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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A very spiritual meaning to your poem. I liked the color and picture that you selected to go with it. A good read. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and I'm so glad you liked it and got fed from it. gudbjorg