Stranger on Wolf Lake
200 word entry in Horror6 total reviews
Comment from Lon Frank
I liked this little flash story, not so much for what it said, but where it left off. I always think the reader's imagination is a necessary part of any story, and leaving this scene so ripe with expectancy was an excellent move.
Now the real horror of what I think may be going to happen...!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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I liked this little flash story, not so much for what it said, but where it left off. I always think the reader's imagination is a necessary part of any story, and leaving this scene so ripe with expectancy was an excellent move.
Now the real horror of what I think may be going to happen...!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2010
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cute, love the answer.
Comment from Diascribe
Nice story. Tight with a good flow and solid ending. Most of the others didn't really end well, I thought. Good work.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Nice story. Tight with a good flow and solid ending. Most of the others didn't really end well, I thought. Good work.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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You are pretty generous. I thought Cat Food was brilliant.
Comment from venusanblue
I enjoyed this story. So who was baiting who? Looks like you lost. The one that didn't get away. I like a twist in the tale. Enjoyable.
V,xx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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I enjoyed this story. So who was baiting who? Looks like you lost. The one that didn't get away. I like a twist in the tale. Enjoyable.
V,xx
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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As unaccustomed as I am......to trying to create horror in any form, ok I lied, just ask my ex-husband, I'm glad that you enjoyed my stab, ho ho, at this venue.
Comment from Begin Again
Writer,
Oooh No! What a way to be repaid for kindness..Guess that's what makes it a good horror, huh? Good luck in the contest.
Carol
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Writer,
Oooh No! What a way to be repaid for kindness..Guess that's what makes it a good horror, huh? Good luck in the contest.
Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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thanks
Comment from adewpearl
I don't think you want "that" in the opening sentence
The final sentence in that paragraph also has an awkward construction to it.
They say we should listen to our instincts - I guess the narrator of this story should have gone with that initial chill that went down his spine and forgotten about offering the silent stranger a mug of coffee. LOL
That is one creepy ending to your flash horror story!! Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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I don't think you want "that" in the opening sentence
The final sentence in that paragraph also has an awkward construction to it.
They say we should listen to our instincts - I guess the narrator of this story should have gone with that initial chill that went down his spine and forgotten about offering the silent stranger a mug of coffee. LOL
That is one creepy ending to your flash horror story!! Brooke
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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I'll take another look. Thanks. It's easier when there is no set word limit. I had to be a brutal editor.
Comment from jl & bandit
Nice twist !
I find it hard to write for these prompts, but really enjoy reading what others come up with. This was great to read, wish you well in the contest !
JL&B
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Nice twist !
I find it hard to write for these prompts, but really enjoy reading what others come up with. This was great to read, wish you well in the contest !
JL&B
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Thanks, I usually pass too, but its a great discipline to write about subjects that are listed rather than have a passionate attachment to your own imagination.
