Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "You Must Be Joking!"A book of a mixture of stories
40 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow, you had me going for most of the story. Well played out with the charectors and dialogue. A lot of time and effort went into there well played out plan as an ample amount of time also went into yours to plan and write this out. Well done...
John
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Wow, you had me going for most of the story. Well played out with the charectors and dialogue. A lot of time and effort went into there well played out plan as an ample amount of time also went into yours to plan and write this out. Well done...
John
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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John,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Your encouragment and support is greatly appreciated. Hope you have a great day...Smiles, Carol
Comment from pickthorn
The end caught me by surprise too. I thought Shelly was going to discover that Kate and Rob had something going and then discover that everybody else was in on it too. LOL Cute story. Nice job of writing... It gave me a chuckle.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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The end caught me by surprise too. I thought Shelly was going to discover that Kate and Rob had something going and then discover that everybody else was in on it too. LOL Cute story. Nice job of writing... It gave me a chuckle.
pickthorn
Comment Written 05-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the kind review. I appreciate all your comments..Smiles, Carol
Comment from MJames82
Great story. It took me in right from the beginning and held my eyes captive right up until the end. will have to check out more of your work! Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Great story. It took me in right from the beginning and held my eyes captive right up until the end. will have to check out more of your work! Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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I appreciate your kindness and encouragment more than you'll ever know..smiles, Carol
Comment from jl & bandit
You are such a great writer !! I'm happy to see this has gotten all time best !!!
CONGRATS !!!
This is a great april fools story!!
JL&B
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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You are such a great writer !! I'm happy to see this has gotten all time best !!!
CONGRATS !!!
This is a great april fools story!!
JL&B
Comment Written 03-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from melyuki
oh you little devil.. I knew you had something up your sleeve. but april fool.. no I didnt think of that one I have to be honest.. good one sis. just throw us into complete turmoil, turn us upside down and then just say April Fool.... I should have expected as much from my big teasing sis... I will have you back for this one cheeky gal.... great little twist and very unexpected. well done big sis.... luv n hugs or should I say.. nooo.... cant say that here. might get the wrong idea... see ya, hugs from little sis. xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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oh you little devil.. I knew you had something up your sleeve. but april fool.. no I didnt think of that one I have to be honest.. good one sis. just throw us into complete turmoil, turn us upside down and then just say April Fool.... I should have expected as much from my big teasing sis... I will have you back for this one cheeky gal.... great little twist and very unexpected. well done big sis.... luv n hugs or should I say.. nooo.... cant say that here. might get the wrong idea... see ya, hugs from little sis. xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from L.lora
Oh my, I do hope Shelly gets
them good, they certainly
deserve it. Wow, well thought
out and presented, even this
skeptic got caught up in your
story and never saw it coming.
Good one. typo="The waitress [place(ed)] the plate on the table"
Lora
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Oh my, I do hope Shelly gets
them good, they certainly
deserve it. Wow, well thought
out and presented, even this
skeptic got caught up in your
story and never saw it coming.
Good one. typo="The waitress [place(ed)] the plate on the table"
Lora
Comment Written 03-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Veekz
Hahahaha! Loved this story - I was feeling just as sick as poor Shelly thinking about how horrible the whole 'best friend and boyfriend' situation would be and was completely blindsided by the twist at the end. It may have been a twist that's been used before but you have made it unique and your own by building up such a different story prior. Truly laughed out loud :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Hahahaha! Loved this story - I was feeling just as sick as poor Shelly thinking about how horrible the whole 'best friend and boyfriend' situation would be and was completely blindsided by the twist at the end. It may have been a twist that's been used before but you have made it unique and your own by building up such a different story prior. Truly laughed out loud :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Carol,
Love your story you have done it again with your surprised ending.
I also got a good laugh
Fun to read.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Hello Carol,
Love your story you have done it again with your surprised ending.
I also got a good laugh
Fun to read.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hey crabsalad is one of my favorites. I will be careful where I eat it from now on. I enjoyed your cute short story. You do a wonderful with them.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Hey crabsalad is one of my favorites. I will be careful where I eat it from now on. I enjoyed your cute short story. You do a wonderful with them.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sasha
What a fun ride this was. You had me in stitches at the end. Great story, well written and as I said, a delight to read, keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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What a fun ride this was. You had me in stitches at the end. Great story, well written and as I said, a delight to read, keep up the great work.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate your support. Smiles, Carol