Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Welcome Life"a collection of spiritual poems
60 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful and powerful poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has such great imagery. It's so poignant and powerful. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is a beautiful and powerful poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has such great imagery. It's so poignant and powerful. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet about the wonder if life itself not only in humans but all around us in nature. New born wildlife flowers blooming once again and sprouts pushing through the snow to claim their life.
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A very well-written sonnet about the wonder if life itself not only in humans but all around us in nature. New born wildlife flowers blooming once again and sprouts pushing through the snow to claim their life.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Susan Larson
What an upbeat view of life and it's different forms. In my old age, I have even learned to welcome life in weeds. As all my daylilies were dying away, weeds popped up up that I couldn't poison and dreaded pulling. But their green leaves just replaced the daylilies that died. And they, too, will die on their own, making room for the lilies upon their return to life. Something to look forward to welcoming back in the spring!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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What an upbeat view of life and it's different forms. In my old age, I have even learned to welcome life in weeds. As all my daylilies were dying away, weeds popped up up that I couldn't poison and dreaded pulling. But their green leaves just replaced the daylilies that died. And they, too, will die on their own, making room for the lilies upon their return to life. Something to look forward to welcoming back in the spring!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Boogienights
This poem is filled with beautiful imagery, it made me fill happy to be alive. I could picture it all in my head, making me wish I could see those wild horses. Life truly is a beautiful thing. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This poem is filled with beautiful imagery, it made me fill happy to be alive. I could picture it all in my head, making me wish I could see those wild horses. Life truly is a beautiful thing. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
This is a beautifully written tribute to the many reasons we should be thankful to be alive. The rhythm of your poem is quite musical, the words roll off the tongue of the reader.
I found this poem to be very uplifting and positive in its outlook, a lovely way to start the day. The picture is a perfect match.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is a beautifully written tribute to the many reasons we should be thankful to be alive. The rhythm of your poem is quite musical, the words roll off the tongue of the reader.
I found this poem to be very uplifting and positive in its outlook, a lovely way to start the day. The picture is a perfect match.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Muse!
What an uplifting poem to greet me this morning! It would appear that you and I welcome the very same things! I especially smiled when I read,
"... in innocence of every newborn child" as my husband and I will be welcoming our first grandchild in just a few short weeks!
Beautiful visual and emotive imagery!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Good Morning, Muse!
What an uplifting poem to greet me this morning! It would appear that you and I welcome the very same things! I especially smiled when I read,
"... in innocence of every newborn child" as my husband and I will be welcoming our first grandchild in just a few short weeks!
Beautiful visual and emotive imagery!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed this. Congratulations on the upcoming grandchild!
Comment from June Sargent
Well you have given me a great start to a new day with this lovely piece. The imagery is splendid. I love poppies and sunflowers, so vibrant and beautiful! And wild horses give me that sense of freedom to roam. Thank you!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Well you have given me a great start to a new day with this lovely piece. The imagery is splendid. I love poppies and sunflowers, so vibrant and beautiful! And wild horses give me that sense of freedom to roam. Thank you!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am glad this gave your day a great start.
Comment from TPAC
Lovely read, pleasing aspects found throughout its course, tingling thoughts striking the mind creating ideals that are positive. I found well structured in its presented form. A great read in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Lovely read, pleasing aspects found throughout its course, tingling thoughts striking the mind creating ideals that are positive. I found well structured in its presented form. A great read in my given opinion.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a well done poem. I enjoy the repeated line as it is not overdone. I think you did a great job avoiding heavy cliches and presenting this in an understated way. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is a well done poem. I enjoy the repeated line as it is not overdone. I think you did a great job avoiding heavy cliches and presenting this in an understated way. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I Welcome Life", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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"I Welcome Life", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am happy that you enjoyed this.
You're welcome, and I certainly did.
God bless,take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess
