Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Welcome Life"a collection of spiritual poems
60 total reviews
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Everything God created He found good and full of life, light and truth: there is only life and light and truth in Him. That you are pleased to see this in the natural world is a true gift; a scientist of sorts, discovering the wonders of His creation. You expressed it beautifully in rhythm and rhyme, images and concepts. giovanni
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Everything God created He found good and full of life, light and truth: there is only life and light and truth in Him. That you are pleased to see this in the natural world is a true gift; a scientist of sorts, discovering the wonders of His creation. You expressed it beautifully in rhythm and rhyme, images and concepts. giovanni
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
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Comment from gramalot8
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I love all the things in the world that you see as a way to welcome life. There is beauty in all the living things around us... as well as some of the dormant objects as well.
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I love all the things in the world that you see as a way to welcome life. There is beauty in all the living things around us... as well as some of the dormant objects as well.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much. Yes, there is so much out there to be grateful for!
Comment from Mary Furlong
Wonderful sonnet with lovely images galore. This was a very enjoyable read. I stumbled bit at the sunflowers line. You need to say sunflahr to make it scan. But a lovely poem nonetheless. I
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Wonderful sonnet with lovely images galore. This was a very enjoyable read. I stumbled bit at the sunflowers line. You need to say sunflahr to make it scan. But a lovely poem nonetheless. I
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a charming poem. The rhymes are well thought out and clever. I especially enjoyed reading the last stanza. The message is an optimistic one. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a charming poem. The rhymes are well thought out and clever. I especially enjoyed reading the last stanza. The message is an optimistic one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Eternal Muse, This is just such a positive and life confirming poem to read. It is exactly the same way I see life. Every day has to be lived to the full. So much around to give us joy even in these dire times. I loved your poem. Ulla:)))
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Hi Eternal Muse, This is just such a positive and life confirming poem to read. It is exactly the same way I see life. Every day has to be lived to the full. So much around to give us joy even in these dire times. I loved your poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am glad the poem resonated with you. Yes, there is so much to be grateful for! God has been generous.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I enjoyed reading this. I imagine this is what it must feel like to work on the maternity ward. Every day the nurses who work there are seeing new life. A well written piece.
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I enjoyed reading this. I imagine this is what it must feel like to work on the maternity ward. Every day the nurses who work there are seeing new life. A well written piece.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful poem. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes and vivid imagery. I could see, and agree with, all the wonderful images you mentioned about the beauty of nature. I like the lines about the wild horses. Your image is perfect, too. Thank you for sharing an upbeat poem--we all need poems like this everyday.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is a beautiful poem. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes and vivid imagery. I could see, and agree with, all the wonderful images you mentioned about the beauty of nature. I like the lines about the wild horses. Your image is perfect, too. Thank you for sharing an upbeat poem--we all need poems like this everyday.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from victor 66
Eternal Muse, you must have a very happy life because you expect so little and observe and feel so much. These are both signs of a truly whole person and it's too bad more people do not feel the same way. I thought this poem was very well done. Best wishes.
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Eternal Muse, you must have a very happy life because you expect so little and observe and feel so much. These are both signs of a truly whole person and it's too bad more people do not feel the same way. I thought this poem was very well done. Best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the exceptional review and the six stars.
I am honored.
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You are most welcome and it was my pleasure. Good luck with your writing.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
A lovely poem about the joy of living. Look around you and see the blessings God has given us. There is so much beauty in the world and we are often too busy to notice it. We have trashed it up with plastic and rubber and oil. Cut down trees that are a hundred plus years old. That is only a few of the mistakes we have made. Lovely poem, dear. Nancy:)
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A lovely poem about the joy of living. Look around you and see the blessings God has given us. There is so much beauty in the world and we are often too busy to notice it. We have trashed it up with plastic and rubber and oil. Cut down trees that are a hundred plus years old. That is only a few of the mistakes we have made. Lovely poem, dear. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a pretty poem about the places where you find love. Finding love in the flowers that poke through the snow and in a child's innocense are the ones that you mentioned that I liked. Love can be found anywhere if you look for it. Good job!
Patty
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This is a pretty poem about the places where you find love. Finding love in the flowers that poke through the snow and in a child's innocense are the ones that you mentioned that I liked. Love can be found anywhere if you look for it. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
