Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Welcome Life"a collection of spiritual poems
60 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I Welcome Life
by Eternal Muse
Hello, my friend,
Wonderful poem about welcoming life in all forms. I like the imagery and well chosen words.
The presentation is nice. I love red poppies. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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I Welcome Life
by Eternal Muse
Hello, my friend,
Wonderful poem about welcoming life in all forms. I like the imagery and well chosen words.
The presentation is nice. I love red poppies. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I am so glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The words flow with the sentences rhyming. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like how you structured this poem. I like it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The words flow with the sentences rhyming. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like how you structured this poem. I like it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
You have a wealth of poetry to draw from, dear Muse. I'm enjoying each and every one. I especially love this one. I especially love orchard's bliss and kiss.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs....
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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You have a wealth of poetry to draw from, dear Muse. I'm enjoying each and every one. I especially love this one. I especially love orchard's bliss and kiss.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs....
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Eternal Muse, this is such a lovely poem, in sonnet form with good abab rhyme throughout. An ode to nature, beautifully expressed. Well displayed with lovely poppies. Well done - regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Hello Eternal Muse, this is such a lovely poem, in sonnet form with good abab rhyme throughout. An ode to nature, beautifully expressed. Well displayed with lovely poppies. Well done - regards Dorothy
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from mauial
Very melodic read to me. I like the way you emphasized the theme of your poem i with, I welcome life, at the beginning of each stanza. My favorite is the very last stanza.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Very melodic read to me. I like the way you emphasized the theme of your poem i with, I welcome life, at the beginning of each stanza. My favorite is the very last stanza.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Muse.
-A well written poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show all of the
beautiful things in nature that
you appreciate, and how they
"welcome life," like the seas,
flowers, and songbirds.
-They do add joy to life.
-A very good concluding couplet, too.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Muse.
-A well written poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show all of the
beautiful things in nature that
you appreciate, and how they
"welcome life," like the seas,
flowers, and songbirds.
-They do add joy to life.
-A very good concluding couplet, too.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Pam. I am glad that you liked it.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great poem about welcoming life in all its various forms! I like the specific images that you have chosen to present through your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Bill
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Great poem about welcoming life in all its various forms! I like the specific images that you have chosen to present through your well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Bill
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is beautifully written about life and it is so positive. It talked about budding tree, poppies, horses and song birds. It ended in a happy lover's kiss. I love the life painted in this poem.
Thank you for the positive energy.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This poem is beautifully written about life and it is so positive. It talked about budding tree, poppies, horses and song birds. It ended in a happy lover's kiss. I love the life painted in this poem.
Thank you for the positive energy.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from royowen
I love this because it reflects a poet's heart, the funny I can remember after my first encounter with God, REALLY seeing the sunset for the sunset for the first time, and knowing that He actually wrote His name on it, I learnt played a musical instrument and wrote lyrics for the first time at 45, so I can relate to the poet's heart, but even then, it was still a journey, a beautifully written sonnet through the medium of the heart's form of poetry, well done, Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I love this because it reflects a poet's heart, the funny I can remember after my first encounter with God, REALLY seeing the sunset for the sunset for the first time, and knowing that He actually wrote His name on it, I learnt played a musical instrument and wrote lyrics for the first time at 45, so I can relate to the poet's heart, but even then, it was still a journey, a beautifully written sonnet through the medium of the heart's form of poetry, well done, Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Roy. This poem is a chapter in a book "Spiritual Oasis." You can flip through other chapters, they are your style, I think you will like them.
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Well done dear friend,
Comment from Willie P. Smith
A clearly understandable and well written poem. I could see no mistakes or other corrections that need to be made. I did, however; have to look up
the meaning of one of your words. Very good work.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A clearly understandable and well written poem. I could see no mistakes or other corrections that need to be made. I did, however; have to look up
the meaning of one of your words. Very good work.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
