Date Night
That's versione br3 total reviews
Comment from forestport12
Wow. The dialogue in this is believable and well placed. YOu have a gift to know how to use humor and make it work with dialogue and a solid idea for a story. Well thought and well written.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Wow. The dialogue in this is believable and well placed. YOu have a gift to know how to use humor and make it work with dialogue and a solid idea for a story. Well thought and well written.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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very kind. thank you.
Comment from Moe Dylan
You have a great sense of humor and the dialogue was done well. It not only carried the scene but summarized it as well. Good job and hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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You have a great sense of humor and the dialogue was done well. It not only carried the scene but summarized it as well. Good job and hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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me too! Can always use the ficticious cash! Thanks.
Comment from mmmichelle34
That was a very nice peace of work to sit and read you have a way of writing that keeps the reader interested. hope to see more of your work on here
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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That was a very nice peace of work to sit and read you have a way of writing that keeps the reader interested. hope to see more of your work on here
Comment Written 06-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
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Keeps coming. Thanks for your interest and your response.