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Date Night

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3 total reviews 
Comment from forestport12
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Wow. The dialogue in this is believable and well placed. YOu have a gift to know how to use humor and make it work with dialogue and a solid idea for a story. Well thought and well written.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
    very kind. thank you.
Comment from Moe Dylan
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You have a great sense of humor and the dialogue was done well. It not only carried the scene but summarized it as well. Good job and hope you win the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
    me too! Can always use the ficticious cash! Thanks.
Comment from mmmichelle34
Excellent
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That was a very nice peace of work to sit and read you have a way of writing that keeps the reader interested. hope to see more of your work on here

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2010
    Keeps coming. Thanks for your interest and your response.