Scarecrow
inspired by Father Flaps36 total reviews
Comment from Xylok
this is fun and creative and clever and i adore the cadence and the overall general happy mood, and its also neat to live through the eyes of the scarecrow's ups and downs as you've presented so many concepts related herein. great work! made me smile and think. love to do both.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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this is fun and creative and clever and i adore the cadence and the overall general happy mood, and its also neat to live through the eyes of the scarecrow's ups and downs as you've presented so many concepts related herein. great work! made me smile and think. love to do both.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2012
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once again a belated thank you!! This is really embarrassing that I am just answering all these gracious reviews. thank you ever so much..jimi
Comment from Gungalo
Your life is easy, filled with joy
Mine is without a mate to dance
But I'm a scarecrow, not man, nor boy
Would a straw beauty take the chance?
I love this sort of offshoot of the Wiz and all the emotions of the scarecrow too. Great job girl and a write that touches the senses too!!!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Your life is easy, filled with joy
Mine is without a mate to dance
But I'm a scarecrow, not man, nor boy
Would a straw beauty take the chance?
I love this sort of offshoot of the Wiz and all the emotions of the scarecrow too. Great job girl and a write that touches the senses too!!!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2011
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Gungalo, oh goodness girl, thank you ever so much. This one was just written on whim in response to a review.. again thank you..jls
I am going to try and get into your portfolio and read and review as much as i can this eek. I love your work. jls
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My pleasure, you!!!
Comment from Poetic Diamond
This is such an adorable poem of an iconic character from the Wizard of Oz. The Scarecrow. It was the most magical movie I had ever seen as a child. I love how you expressed so well what he must feel and the way you incorporated the yellow brick road in the last stanza. Capturing to beautifully what we all seek down the yellow brick road. One hopeful wish. Thanks for sharing. This was truly a delight!
Vikki
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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This is such an adorable poem of an iconic character from the Wizard of Oz. The Scarecrow. It was the most magical movie I had ever seen as a child. I love how you expressed so well what he must feel and the way you incorporated the yellow brick road in the last stanza. Capturing to beautifully what we all seek down the yellow brick road. One hopeful wish. Thanks for sharing. This was truly a delight!
Vikki
Comment Written 13-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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Poetic Diamond, thank you so very much for stopping to read and review my work. I appreciate you very much.. again thank you!!! jlsavell
Comment from Judian James
"I have no heart, no brain, no legs
My hat is not of dappers style
Unshaved I am with haggard dregs
But still I wear a cheerful smile" What a sweet, sweet poem this is Jimi. He's lookin' for love! So dear!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2010
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"I have no heart, no brain, no legs
My hat is not of dappers style
Unshaved I am with haggard dregs
But still I wear a cheerful smile" What a sweet, sweet poem this is Jimi. He's lookin' for love! So dear!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2010
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Judian, once again I am so happy to see you stop by. You have been away for a while. Yes, this was just written on a whim, inspired by another writer on the site. again thank you so much..jimi
Comment from Dave M
Jimi,
This is an excellent poem about the dude who wanted to get a set of brains. But as boring as his job is, maybe he'd be better off without him. I recognize the actor in the picture, although his name escapes me.
I couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Jimi,
This is an excellent poem about the dude who wanted to get a set of brains. But as boring as his job is, maybe he'd be better off without him. I recognize the actor in the picture, although his name escapes me.
I couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Dave, once again thank you my friend. I apologize for the delayed response...hope you are doing well..jimi
Comment from Arkine
~L~ Truthfully, the scarecrow was always my favorite. And guys always complain that it's so hard for them to attract a mate, this poor fellow really has it rough! Nicely done! :)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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~L~ Truthfully, the scarecrow was always my favorite. And guys always complain that it's so hard for them to attract a mate, this poor fellow really has it rough! Nicely done! :)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2010
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Arkine, yes he really really has it hard. lol..thank you ever so much once again..jimi
Comment from grassroots08
I hail from the birthplace of Frank L. Baum and this is on the money. In our local Oz Fest, I was the Tin Man. My blonde daughter was Dorithy in a lovely blue dress and brown wig. LOL Neat work here my friend, Cheers, Don
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2010
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I hail from the birthplace of Frank L. Baum and this is on the money. In our local Oz Fest, I was the Tin Man. My blonde daughter was Dorithy in a lovely blue dress and brown wig. LOL Neat work here my friend, Cheers, Don
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2010
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Don, wow you are so very encouraging and kind. I am thrilled oyu enjoyed it so much. Where have you been my friend, where have you been..again thank you so very much..now you go take on the day...jimi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good day jlsavell
Your scarecrow rhyming poem made me smile.
With the silly face and the silly clothes to me would make the crows have a good time laughing.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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Good day jlsavell
Your scarecrow rhyming poem made me smile.
With the silly face and the silly clothes to me would make the crows have a good time laughing.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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Gert, thank you so very much. You are always so encouraging and supportive. I value you tremendously.. again thank you ..jlsavell
Comment from BLACKDYKE
How fantastic is this! It trips off the tongue like spring water. Let me see, have I saved a sixer? Aaaaaah yes, and well deserved too. Eric
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2010
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How fantastic is this! It trips off the tongue like spring water. Let me see, have I saved a sixer? Aaaaaah yes, and well deserved too. Eric
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2010
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Eric, oh goodness, thank you ever so much. I never expected such response from my simple little poem inspired by another fanstorian. thank you so very very much. I am humbled..jlsavell
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My pleasure.
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Well deserved..
Comment from chita
You have great artwork and a good flow with your poem-you rhyme well and give good description -you write and describe the scare crow to a tee--he is lifeless but his job is to scare crows away--great job.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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You have great artwork and a good flow with your poem-you rhyme well and give good description -you write and describe the scare crow to a tee--he is lifeless but his job is to scare crows away--great job.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2010
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chita, once again thank you!!! Two of my poems in one day. I am humbled truly. jlsavell
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You're welcome!!
